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3 For 1...the haiku bug bit again
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3 For 1...the haiku bug bit again |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Night Memories In the night dreaming Dreaming of love without end Reality bites Anchored Can you touch the wind? High upon the mountaintop Chained to memories Awake Alone A brush of your lips Feather soft upon my own I awake alone |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I just sent an email to you and I come back to passions and what have you done but written some beautiful haiku ..write on sweeheart... I appreciate these a lot more after our talk.......take care ..ethome... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Just such lovely thoughts wrapped up in this trio of Senryu. They are just perfect. I particularly enjoyed Anchored. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Paula, what a triplet of terrific you have penned here. I love haikus and these are particularly nice. write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Paula~ each one was a tug on my heart this morning......I liked them very much.  -SEA |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Excellent work, and all three seem connected somehow, can't make up my mind wether its reality or dreaming. Maybe I ve read one poem too many lol. More haiku from you (please). Regards Olias. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
ethome...hi...yes got your email...thank you...you know this is new to me lol and OOHHHHH the structure...teehee Lady Marge...ok you are calling this senryu...now I am confused...but Im glad you enjoyed whatever it is I have written LOL...thank you Kethry...something new for me...and I wasnt really looking to write them...they just sort of happened...thanks Interloper...thank you Sea...Im glad you did...anytime I can tug your heart I feel I have done something right...thank you Olias...LOL...I know the feeling...one too many poems...as for more...I dunno...this is not the way I usually write...we will just have to see..thank you |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Paula, these are lovely... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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