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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Gray skies blown away Sunshine warms me through and through A lonely traveler, home at last Sheltered here with you With each loving thing you do My doubts and fears all erased With every action you make clear True love for me is finally here It's not just words; though they are sweet It's not just promises you make It's all you do day in day out That tells me more than words can say We both will give our very best That's something to depend on How blessed I feel; you've made me see I'm worthy of your love for me Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
What a hug of the heart, pepper! This read like sitting in front of a fireplace...cozy, warm, and sweet.. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I agree with serenity...its a warm....cozy...sweet poem....worth to read ....excellent penned.... Charisma |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
You are most definately worthy of this Love Pepper...and it looks stunning on you and your poetry! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
~P35~  This is soooo sweet! My favorite part is: 'It's not just words; though they are sweet It's not just promises you make It's all you do day in day out That tells me more than words can say' Loved this one!!  ~SEA |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Thank you serenity...I like that image Charisma: So glad you enjoyed it!! BDC: Now you have me blushing  laughs Thank you SEA!!! I am handling it all so well, though ... write a poem, bounce off the walls, write a poem, bounce some more laughs Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Pepper, 'aint love grand! It's this roller coaster ride, I don't know if I can handle it. And then I think again I couldn't live without it. Well at least it's not boring. Love this one, Pepper, I really do. Brilliant write. Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
pepper- such a warm and loving write. i enjoyed it much. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
..worthy of your love for me..sometimes we do feel a bit unworthy dont we... what a good feeling to feel worthy of such a wonderful thing this is such a sweet poem, pepper.. hugs, dg< !signature--> "so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 11-16-2000).] |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Absolutely right, Marsha!!! Boring, it's not!!! Thank you Thanks Vicky.. kind words indeed Thank you too dgvarner... it's a great feeling Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is touching....very touching |
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