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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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don't even know the true reason why I keep asking, "how are you?" each time we kiss and hug, amid love-scented airs of pure romance don't even know the true reason why I see fear gripping your soul when you look straight but seem so lost amongst past, scarred by broken love don't even know the true reason why I feel the need to hold you in these arms that strive just to calm the shakings in your nervous heart don't even know the true reason why I am writing down these lines when I know I should be with you telling you how much I love you I love you and know you do too maybe that's why, maybe that's why ~ [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 11-13-2000).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Lovely Sudhir..yes i think that is why..enjoyed  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
of course that's why... welcome back Sudhir... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Romantic, sensual. Lucky is the woman who has your heart, this is truly a moving piece. [This message has been edited by dragonpoe (edited 11-13-2000).] |
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Mick Hawkes Member
since 2000-10-26
Posts 90Tees-side , England |
i bet she loved this.. such love helps you to write from the heart.. i think this is where this one came from... Thanks Mick A smile a day helps you work , rest & play. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Victoria, Thanks so much... I think we are in agreement Karilea, Thank you very much... and for the welcome... dragonpoe, thank you... but I think lucky is me who has a beautiful lady's beautiful heart... Mick, thank you ... seeing you for the first toime here... WELCOME TO PASSIONS Regards to all, Sudhir |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Sudhir, she had to love this, otherwise "poof" I'm going to hit the hay my friend nice to see you. dale |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Sudhir sounds like a man in love alright, someone who might be caught up amid the love scented airs of pure romance....yep...hooked I don't know whether it's really you or not but if it's not you're one heck of a good writer...which you always were....but this one has very sweet and gentle overtones to it but it's still a bit more direct and definite ...wonderful composition my good man wonderful!!....ethome |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
dale, thanks so much for coming by and for your response... see ya later... ethome, your words mean so much to me... thanks... regards, sudhir |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sudhir lyer~ So glad to see you posting again.......this is wonderful.....you in love makes for some awesome poetry dear one -SEA |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sud~ So much beauty in this...lovely tender read my friend ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
SEA, your words mean a lot... thanks tracie, (((HUGS))) back to you, my friend and many thanks Regards, Sudhir |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Your caring nature shines in this poem, Sudhir. Great to see you back! Corinne |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Hey Corinne, Thank you so much.... Regards, Sudhir |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is sweet |
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