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catch 22...my first haiku attempt
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catch 22...my first haiku attempt |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
story of my life i am free...but you are not someday we will be |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Paula? with me it's the other way 'round...still a very frustrating situation, hugs to you, because I do understand the exasperation of not even being able to try.... |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Good job with this one; it doesn't take lots of words to send a message loud and clear!!! Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Your Haiku is great First attempt has succeeded You shall write many Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Paula~ I am so jealous!! Fantastic haiku.....I wish I could do that.  -SEA |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
excellent haiku. i admire your talent. simply beautiful. take care. ~amy~ |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~A packed little one this is. Weighted and soOo well done. Take care P. *Peace. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
moth drawn to the flame die to hear you say my name lose again loves game ********** you said it all in 3 lines girlie-- some times less is more ... your words had all the impact great job ... take care jm |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Very good job. I wish I could write those. you said a lot in those 3 lines |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Good title and this can not continue for much longer...hope you can write a new chapter....soon...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Paula I don't know much about Haiku but I have to say that you said a lot here with just a few words.....anyone could take the substance and apply it to their own situation take care ethome |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Wow Paula...so much with so few~ |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Paula, In just three lines. Perfect. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Serenity...either way its not a nice feeling huh? Thank you Pepper...no sometimes it only takes one word Interloper...such a sweet reply...thank you for giving me that gift Sea...thank you sweet lady...you write beautifully Aimster...your words are a gift...and I treasure them thanks Spitfire...Thank you...it just seemed to write itself JM...hi sweetie...less is more...would be nice to have a little less pain and lot more love but as I said...story of my life thanks Alan...you can...just try...thank you James...oh babe I hope it doesnt...dont know how much more this ole heart can take...hugs friend ethome...LOL I dont know much about it either but it just felt right when I started writing...thank you Holly...yes thanks LOL Daniel...it was an accomplishment for me...to not ramble on and on thanks friend |
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