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To Turn and Behold................
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To Turn and Behold................ |
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Sunshine
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To Turn and Behold she turned about and around and glimpsed, one early morning, at the feel of a thought, and although the songbirds were welcoming the morning, Ra's rays were dancing with the dust motes, and the breeze still smelled of starshine and leftover moonlight she beheld the stranger that had been harboring this bizarre, inner period for some time, and whom had finally made a quiet entrance, this peculiar individual that seemed as unique in stature as any one seemingly female might be, if they could be unique from others' comparisons, and she turned, and faced the stranger of her inner soul, on hearing the faint sound of a lonesome thought, and in her reason she felt the warmth of the exclusive embrace which allowed as to let her discern it would be all right for all time and confidently welcomed into her heart this new friend… and felt then again as one as she acquiesced age < !signature--> Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-14-2000).] |
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Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Acquiesce not... too much to do... too much to see... Nice poem, though... for sure..  |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sunshine, you are coming up with more styles than I can keep track of...and each one is better than the one before....and I have NEVER seen Ra outside of a crossword puzzle! Kidding aside, this poem is very special  |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine, Nice writing and interesting concept. It is through self acceptance that we are able to achieve inner peace and happiness. Well said. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Sunshine
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Nan, this is for when I turn 92...you didn't think NOW, did you? {~,^} 'Deer, don't keep track, just enjoy! {~,^}...thank you both!! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Sunshine
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LoneWolf, as you say...it is so...when I turn 92...until then, I'm going to wrinkle in laughter... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Sunshine ~ Is this acquiesence going to take place on your 92nd birthday in Egypt? Thanks for putting self acceptance into verse. A good lesson for all. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, wonderful, utterly amazing poem, I really love this one Kari. Your work is so awesome it just keeps getting better and better. (I'm not one to stiffle poetic inspiration, but can't you slow down just a little. I'm running out of superlatives with you.)And then what will I do, I'll have to find some more I suppose. Can't quite see myself doing that scene from Aladdin, where the wicked Ebernaza, goes round giving new lamps for old. Only in my case it would be, new superlatives for old. (Oy! psst, got any old praise going, I can give you 4 wonderfuls for that missus) Sorry I'm in a frivalous mood, it's one of those days.  Take care Majestic Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
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Interloper, probably, and I may not show up until 98...[thanks for reading!] Marsha, I can see you have a penchant for "different" and I bless you for every moment you spend reading what I pen...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Casablanca Confidential Junior Member
since 2000-11-15
Posts 13Virgin Islands |
wow this is too famaliar a theme for me... sometimes I feel like two people too.. you know how to whistle... just pucker up and blow |
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Sunshine
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Casa...then you read the words just right...WELCOME to Passions...sit back, read, write, enjoy, and have just a wonderful time with this great crowd of poets! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
It's good to welcome your other self. . . you never know what you can learn from them. . . wonderful. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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Sven, first you allow me one...then more...and you're probably right...LOL... thanks for reading... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Sunshine, What a welcome. Superb, great write. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Much reflection here - 'and she turned, and faced the stranger of her inner soul, on hearing the faint sound of a lonesome thought,' Hey ... I got one of those too or is that two ? Sometimes I think you're at the boutique trying on different styles - this one becomes you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Daniel, thank you good Sir... Marge, it IS "two"...and at this boutique there are many clothes of purple...come and join me here, one size fits all... hugs... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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