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In A Moment
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In A Moment |
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eyesplus2 Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 163australia |
In a second........... A breath was held.......... In a minute.......... A Hand was touched..... In a Hour........ An I do was spoken........ In a day.......... A joy was shared....... In a week....... Two lives were started as one.......... In a Heartbeat............ I fell in love with you....... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
It is like that, isn't it? a sort of shock of familiarity... myself? I remember thinking first--"who are you?" and then---"where have you BEEN?" HUGS |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
It certainly doesn't take long for important things to happen that change our lives forever..... Wonderful writing here  Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
So few words...such a beautiful message. This is a glittering gem~ |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
In a Heartbeat............ I fell in love with you....... Yes I didn't know what true love was til one day I looked over at him and knew I'd never be the same. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is, I think, my favorite of yours so far. I loved the way it felt like reading memories......  Very beautiful, pulls on the heart strings. -SEA |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Very nice. All the meaning ever needed compacted in to these brief but powerful lines. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
And that sums that up beautifully and quickly and honestly...very good write!! |
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bestgirl911 Senior Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 551Clio, MI , United We Stand |
This is wonderful!... <~~~~is still wainting for that special moment...but this made me dream of it all over again. Best |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that was fast! |
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