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eyesplus2
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0 posted 2000-11-15 01:36 AM


In a second...........
A breath was held..........

In a minute..........
A Hand was touched.....

In a Hour........
An I do was spoken........

In a day..........
A joy was shared.......

In a week.......
Two lives were started as one..........

In a Heartbeat............
I fell in love with you.......


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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2000-11-15 02:30 AM


It is like that, isn't it?

a sort of shock of familiarity...

myself? I remember thinking first--"who are you?" and then---"where have you BEEN?"

HUGS

peppermint35
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2 posted 2000-11-15 02:35 AM


It certainly doesn't take long for important things to happen that change our lives forever.....

Wonderful writing here

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

Butterflies_dont_cry
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3 posted 2000-11-15 08:47 AM


So few words...such a beautiful message.  
This is a glittering gem~

inot2B
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4 posted 2000-11-15 09:19 AM


          In a Heartbeat............
          I fell in love with you.......
Yes I didn't know what true love was til one day I looked over at him and knew I'd never be the same.

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5 posted 2000-11-15 09:33 AM


This is, I think, my favorite of yours so far. I loved the way it felt like reading memories...... Very beautiful, pulls on the heart strings.   -SEA
dragonpoe
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6 posted 2000-11-15 09:36 AM


Very nice. All the meaning ever needed compacted in to these brief but powerful lines.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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7 posted 2000-11-15 12:29 PM


And that sums that up beautifully and quickly and honestly...very good write!!
bestgirl911
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8 posted 2000-11-15 01:29 PM


This is wonderful!...
<~~~~is still wainting for that special moment...but this made me dream of it all over again.

Best

passing shadows
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9 posted 2004-06-06 08:18 PM


that was fast!
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