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Faded Memory
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Faded Memory |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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Caught in the weft of time No longer feeling myself A whisper on the wind The keening of an elf Who is lost to all Like autumn leaves now fall Caught on a breeze of hope Sighing in the wind Looking for the grounding rope Of the "what might have been" Wailing in the dark Failing in life's spark Slowly fade away In the morning's light Nothing left for me to stay With nothing left to fight Then what will I be But fading memory. Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Kethry~ this is FANTASTIC! I really liked the ending best.......excellent!  -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry, this is soooo good, I really think this is one of your best, it's so great. I'm saving this one too, great fantastic, work. Love it Take care Slushy Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
but always remembered. . . wonderful Kethry. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Kethry, you will NEVER be a faded memory!! so cheer up!! |
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Masked Intruder
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since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Excellent excellent excellent form going on! Drew me in big time, yo! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A most exquisite poem here, O Kethry... but remember you will never be a fading memory... you and your words are etched in the forever of this reader and friend's soul... regards, sudhir |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I have to echo the words of the above Kethry ...this is so very good! and you will never be a faded memory...write on! |
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poetic_imperfection Junior Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 45 |
Wonderful poem. I like your signature too!! Made me think over my java this morning. PLY |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks everyone, Now I'm sure I could become a fading memory if I could just figure out how to stop writing or posting. *Grins* Be well Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hey Keth great writings hon Never a faded memory sweetie ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks Tracie for the encouragement and the kind words. Be Well Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Eilidh Junior Member
since 2000-08-27
Posts 30 |
I love your poetry, all of it. It reveals a depth to you I bet others rarely see. And touches something in me. I honest;y don't think I could put so muc emotion into 3 paragraphs. I'd need chapters to do what you do. "There are times in life a kindred spirit comes along. Hold onto those people. They are what makes this life worth living."- Anon |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks Eilidh, I love your quote. Be well Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Kethry* In reading your poetry as of late there are so many side of your heart that you are setting free...it's a beautiful sight and may I assure you that to Passions...you will never become just a faded memory...excellent writing~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful penned....I love it and enjoyed it very much. Charisma |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 understanding |
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