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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2000-11-14 10:12 PM



Little Blue Butterfly Flits
~*Marge Tindal*~



I have a little tattoo.
It's a butterfly - delicate and tiny.
Not everyone can see it,
cause it's on my hiney.



But when it comes to be,
that I emerge from my cocoon,
I'll flutter my little 'butt'erfly
clear across the room.







~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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1 posted 2000-11-14 10:14 PM


and on this GIAGANTIC chuckle, I'm turning off the computer!

Great smiles here, little Margie...


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




BillyBull
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2 posted 2000-11-14 10:20 PM


Ok Sis,
Which side? Been reading for about 5 hours
and just went back to # 10 and saw this one.
Beat everyone this time.
Don't let it fly out the window.LOL

inot2B
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3 posted 2000-11-14 10:23 PM


I don't know too much about tatoos. Does it grow as you gain weight? Just curious, I was thinking about you taking flight.
             Bottoms Up

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4 posted 2000-11-14 10:25 PM


Karilea~
Thanks for the chuckle, gal !
Nite !

BillyBulldog~
Oh, my !
Brothers aren't supposed to know about
Sis's butterflies !  LOL !  
Hi there - YOU !
Good to see you here.
Will e-mail you shortly.
Bunches of love.
FIVE HOURS ?  Careful ... it's addicting !  
Love you ...
~*Sis*~


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Butterflies_dont_cry
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5 posted 2000-11-14 10:27 PM


Naughty little giggles here...I'll keep my
butterfly wings sealed as to where mine is  
Loved this little teaser Marge~

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6 posted 2000-11-14 11:03 PM


Well, I am such a lucky guy
Cause I saw Marge's butterfly!
The first time she showed me the moon
It was just a small cocoon.

The second time it spread its wings
The third time did all kinds of things!
The fourth time I still really think
It looked at me and gave a wink!
The fifth time wings were fully spread
The sixth time almost knocked me dead!
By the time we got to number seven
I knew I'd died and gone to heaven.

Dear Marge, please know how much that I
Adore that little butterfly!!!!

Ed Note: All wishful thinking, folks  



[This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 11-14-2000).]

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7 posted 2000-11-14 11:17 PM


INot2B~
Well, didn't you just sneak in on me !
Thank you - and I don't know about it growing ...
but I think I'm glad I'm a light-weight !  

ButterfliesDC~
Glad to know you've got one -
I think I'd be disappointed if you didn't. Tee-Hee !  

Balladeer~

You've seen me flutter
That is true
But you're supposed to keep it
JUST TO YOU !

Can't have the Passion
tongues-a-wagging ...
So you just quit
that joyful bragging !  

EdNote~
We could change that in a heartbeat !
Love you~
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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8 posted 2000-11-15 01:13 AM


~*Marge*~
you made me smile....  
you always suprise me with your talent.


((hugs))
Charisma

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9 posted 2000-11-15 02:18 AM


MOM?  

lol...(how cute are you gonna get?) made me grin again, m'friend....love ya much...now...go flap dem wings!!!!

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10 posted 2000-11-15 02:20 AM


Absolutely priceless, gave me the giggles

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

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11 posted 2000-11-15 02:22 AM


.....LOL
getting back onto my chair now  
This is so funny Margie ((way not expected))
have you had tips from Rex  
~HUG~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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12 posted 2000-11-15 08:53 AM


HAHAHAHA HAHAHAHA Love it Marge!!!!!  Colorful little tail...oooops I mean tale!  Bonnie
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Marge~ this has got to be one of my favories from you!! I do have a butterfly tattoo, but not on my butt!! It's on the back of my left shoulder! LOL @ this wonderful funny poem.   -SEA

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 11-15-2000).]

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14 posted 2000-11-15 10:24 AM


GR8 guffaws.  "Tawdry" humor caught me totally off balance. Shows another side of your skill, not unlike your replies.

I bow to your wit.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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15 posted 2000-11-15 10:24 AM


GR8 guffaws.  "Tawdry" humor caught me totally off balance. Shows another side of your skill, not unlike your replies.

I bow to your wit.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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16 posted 2000-11-15 10:58 AM


I'll be chuckling about this one all day.
Just adorable.

Best

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17 posted 2000-11-15 11:04 AM


~Miss. Tindal,...could you possibly get any cuter?  . (Oh and Sea,...me too on my belly). Loved this! *Peace you.
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18 posted 2000-11-15 11:04 AM


How how cute! I really got a chuckle with this one.
Thanks alot for a bit of bright cheer!  

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

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19 posted 2000-11-15 11:46 AM


Charisma~
Thank ya !  I try !

Serenity~
I'm a' flapping, love !  

PepperMint~
I love spreading giggles !  

Tracie~
LOL !
Now Rex cannot take credit for my little 'butt'erfly !
Balladeer ... maybe !

Bonnie~
Got me giggling, girl !  

SEA~
Why would I have guessed that ?  ! !  

InterLoper~
I've been known to be tawdry ...
I'm just glad to know it shows !  
Thanks for the bow !

BestGirl~
Tickles me to know it !  

SpitFire~
Do we have a flock of butterflies here or what ?
LOVE IT !

DragonPoe~
We butterflies love to spread cheer !  

*Thanks to all for your giggles !
~*Marge*~


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20 posted 2000-11-15 11:58 AM


Dear Marge,

What a delight to read.  Very cute poem.  Put a bright smile on me face!  Thanks.

Poeminister

"There is pleasure in the pathless woods
there is rapture on the lonely shore
there is society where none intrudes
by the deep sea, and music in its roar
I love not man the less but nature more"
--Byron

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21 posted 2000-11-15 02:13 PM


Oh, Marge!  I actually laughed out loud when I read this!  Too cute!  Love it!  

sp  

I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

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22 posted 2000-11-15 06:51 PM


PoeMinister~
I like bright smiles - thank you for wearing one !

SnowPants~
Now THAT'S just what I was after -
thanks for letting me know !
~*Marge*~


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23 posted 2000-11-15 07:02 PM


Marge...oh thank you for this big smile...you are so naughty and nice...
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24 posted 2000-11-15 11:20 PM


Martie~
Tee-Hee ... does that mean Santa is coming ?
Love you, West Coastie Sis !
~*Me*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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25 posted 2000-11-15 11:31 PM


HAHAHAHA!!!!
You must have known I'd appreciate this Marge(y)....

LOL...

This little blue butterfly might suit a tat don't you think?

heh...

K

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26 posted 2000-11-15 11:44 PM


Kamla~
I just KNEW you would !
And it's almost identical !
I knew I'd get a smile out of you before this day was done.
Thank you, sweetie.
*HUGS*
~*Marge(y)*~


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27 posted 2000-11-16 12:13 PM


Marge~

ROFL!!!!!  This was too funny my friend.  Gave me a big laugh and I cannot stop smiling here.     Great one gal.

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Daniel J D
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28 posted 2000-11-16 12:38 PM


Marge,
Magic, this is just crippling me with laughing pains. Beautiful.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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29 posted 2000-11-16 10:35 AM


I don't know how I missed this one...but I'm glad I found it cause it's so cute...could you upload a picture of that Marge I just love Little Blue Butterfy Flits...this is so much a classic Marge Tindal and it's positively great!!  I'm a waitin yep I am!!
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30 posted 2000-11-18 02:07 PM


Marge,
How revealing, (blush), I'm adding this gem to my library , kind of like storing a smile away for a rainy day. How Delightful!
Dennis :^)



Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)



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31 posted 2000-11-18 02:34 PM


LoneWolf~
I'm always pleased to leave a smile.
Hope it keeps fluttering for a while.

JD~
Tickled to leave you grinning.

ETHome~
Your request to upload
I'm afraid I have to deny.
Seems that a lady such as I,
should always show her class ...
not her ............ wings ?  

Dennis~
Well ... believe it or not -
I'm hoping it rains a lot at your place !
*wink*
~*Marge*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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