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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Doctor Please Once I had a woman or should I say she had me. She was kindof, sortof small on top in the mirror she liked not what she would see. As for myself I was pleased with the way the cards did fall. She was my sweetheart and I accepted her small breast and all. Alas she tuned me out in favor of her goal. She dreamed of Dolly Parton and a chest shining forth as gold. She frantically searched the phone books by day and late into the night til she located the proper plastic surgeon the one who could make her right. He drove the finest cars, he sucked the finest wines down he supplied the classiest strip bars with the finest breasts around. His expertise to implant was admired all thru this town. She said, "Dr please do it to me." "Make me big so all the guys will like what they see." He said, "No problem we shall proceed with no reason to hesitate." Come in at eight and by ten you will be on your way with brand new thirty eight's. Now everytime she get's undressed I see two large humongous breast's. She thinks her chest is largely blessed. I think well proportioned is certainly best. Don't know exactly why I feel this way but I really do and I don't know what else to say. Dr please, "I liked her better the other way." Jameslee@October16,2000 [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 10-17-2000).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
How cute, James, and what a happy message to us "regular" women, who could not afford Dr. magic. Peace Sandra |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
James its so very nice to know a man who doesnt let the physical be all he sees. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
James, so glad you subscribe to "more than a handful strains the wrist" theory. Btw I liked you poem. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
James, I love the message you send here. Not just because it is from a male, but because it is a message for both men and women. God gave us what we have for a reason. It is just a shame that so many people focus on what is on the outside instead of what really counts. When we are 80, the looks we once had will have faded. But who we are.....won't ever change. Loved this poem James!!!!  Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i think if it made her feel better about herself then the operation was a success..hopefully it did..nicely written though James.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
James this is a very well written poem, I really like this. Where I come from there's a saying, well there's several about this. Still the cleanest of them 'is what you can't get in your hand is excess fat' I expect you can work out the less acceptable comments. (Well they're acceptable to me but there are some really strange people in this world.) Still each to his or her own I say, and the poem is really good. Take care Marsha  |
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azure Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 52 |
This poem should be taped to the mirror of every woman in America...loved it. Azure "I put it down on paper and then the ghost does not ache so much" - Sandra Cisneros |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sandra, Paula, Kethry, Marina, Victoria, Marsha, and Azure. Victoria at the time...and this is mostly in my past...I was concerned about the cost situation...very expensive...and she was not...some of these bills still exist...she went on to become an exotic dancer..she wants to make sure that David Lee Roth notices her...not sure if she feels better at this time...she sure was at that time...hey everybody look at me... Azure I like your idea and I volunteer for that mission...yes I can be a sort of Johnnie Appleseed planting apple trees all across America..I will post this poem on each mirror and then I will ask the lovely women of America if they are happy with the way they look...if not..for a small fee...$7,000...I'll show them the way to plastic heaven...James |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ this is a great poem, but what about us ladies who are naturally large on top?!?  -SEA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Well now Sea you are a very lucky woman because you already have what many women would pay $5,000 for. I shall let the truth be known for all to see I enjoy every woman that comes to me. She may be big, she may be small, she may be any size at all. But consider this before you start my favorite part of a woman is her heart. James |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ that is So sweet of you......you say everything right. -SEA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sea it's nice to be appreciated and believe me I appreciate you...James |
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