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Deja Vu (been there and done that)
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Deja Vu (been there and done that) Meanwhile back in Paris my French girlfriend from many years now past decided to get back in touch with me. Deja vu and my thoughts return to the city of love at last. Notre Dame and the Eiffel Tower, the Arc de Triomphe and the Louvre. Mon cheri is now beckoning me back to gay Parie'. Yes, yes, oui, oui how I have dearly missed my lovable Parie' and the lovely mademoiselle that loved me tender and french kissed so well. I was only eighteen then as was she. A sweet romance began between her and me. Tender feelings to be shared within long romantic nights illuminated in the beauty of the sparkling Parisian lights. Making love late into the moonlit nights as she whispered sweet french words of love into my ears just right. Words such as "cetait super" and "encore une fois" and my favorite of all was 'j'aime ton derriere mon amour". Or sometimes it would just be a simple "kiss me you fool" and that was always cool. Oh how I fondly remember this sweet Parisian paradise when days seemed to go on forever and on romantic nights she and I blended together. Her name was Angelic. She possessed the finest of French physique and she seductively proved to me that France was a land of romantic opportunity. Her hugs and kisses lasted all thru the night awakening each morning with the bright morning sun to explore the fabulous city of Paris together in fun. Me and this lovely young girl that just seemed to be the one. She and her loveliness beckoning me to make Paris my home in this place I felt so needed and never alone. But wait there's more than meets the eye. Love can provide happiness and love can watch you cry. One day Angelic wanted to stay home before she left for work she wanted to rest and spend some time alone. I told her I would see her after her working hours and went off to climb the Eiffel Tower. As I previewed this magnificant tower view the skies were blue and the clouds strangely unique and soon my thoughts turned to my sweet Angelic. It was then I noticed a telescope to pay for a view so I dropped in a france, if only I knew. The sight I view really took me by surprise cause I could zoom in on Angelic's room right before my eyes. They say don't spy on lovers cause you may not like what your eyes see. They must be right cause my Angelic was kissing another man right before my eyes. Definately couldn't be me cause I was way up high standing on the Eiffel Tower in the Parisian sky. There must be a logical explanation so before I let my mind jump to a conclusion I rushed home to confirm it was not as it seemed perhaps only an illusion or a silly dream. "Oh him, "His name is Pierre. He knows all about me and you and he certainly doesn't care. I was waiting to tell you when I felt the time was right. He means nothing to me he only fulfills my sexual appetite. You are the man I truly love as one would say we fit like a glove. All the others are only seeking sexual gratification you and I are making Love." "All the others, how could this be." I was mortified, I couldn't speak. Heartbroken by my Angelic. Come to find out there were thirty three of course that total included me. Come the evening dew the number fell to thirty two. Au Revoir Angelic I'll miss you. And now I'm glad I took the time to look within to reflect where my life's going and where I've already been. Won't be flying to Charles De Gualle Airport after all. The only Paris I'll be seeing is the pictures I have placed upon my wall. Jameslee@September27,2000 C'etait super....that was great Encore une fois....let's do it again J'aime ton derriere mon amour...I really like your ass my Love...ha..my favorite nymphomaniac...abnormal and uncontrolable desire by a woman for sexual intercourse. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
James, what a wonderful tale you have told. Well, if it was me, I would be running back there to see if she was my true love after all, and then I would be getting kicked all the way down the Eiffel Tower. So you, my friend, seem slightly more level headed. I bet this was a bit of a temptation though. Paris, young and in love, what could be better. Loved this. Sandra |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening James, What a story you have told. I enjoyed this one, and you do having many writing talents, from what I can see. Bill |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
oh what a story you have weaved. definitely top notch. I'm heading out for a croissant now. well maybe some stale french bread at the supermarket. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Cat, Bill and Ron for the wonderful comments...James |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ so that's what I am........"nymphomaniac...abnormal and uncontrolable desire by a woman for sexual intercourse."  No wonder my husband stays so happy!! Excellent write my sweet friend.  -SEA |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
James..Dont know whether this is true or not but it was a fantastic read..i loved it.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you so much Sea and Victoria...Sea I imagine a nymph would do me just fine if she could remain faithful to me...James |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
OK! This one should be in paperback. Vu Jade... (I have a feeling this has never happen to me before) Melton |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I love this story..... well done. Charisma |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
James~ I stay faithfull to my husband..... -SEA |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
James...oh you darlin...this was cute...especially liked the french thrown in... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
James, this is a brilliant read, absolutely great. Love the tale, really well written. I must be one of the few people who detest Paris, I been six times, well I suppose that's not many considering it's just a hop skip and a jump across the channel. But every single time I've been has been a nightmare. Oh yes now there's a memory I'd rather be without.  Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Melton, Charisma, Sea, Paula, and Marsha for reading and responding. Sea that is the way it should be...yes...James |
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