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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2000-10-27 08:03 PM


Deja Vu   (been there and done that)

Meanwhile back in Paris
my French girlfriend from many years now past
decided to get back in touch with me.
Deja vu and my thoughts return to the city of love at last.
Notre Dame and the Eiffel Tower,
the Arc de Triomphe and the Louvre.
Mon cheri is now beckoning me back to gay Parie'.
Yes, yes, oui, oui
how I have dearly missed my lovable Parie'
and the lovely mademoiselle
that loved me tender and french kissed so well.
I was only eighteen then as was she.
A sweet romance began between her and me.
Tender feelings to be shared within long romantic nights
illuminated in the beauty of the sparkling Parisian lights.
Making love late into the moonlit nights
as she whispered sweet french words of love into my ears just right.
Words such as "cetait super" and "encore une fois"
and my favorite of all was 'j'aime ton derriere mon amour".
Or sometimes it would just be a simple "kiss me you fool" and that was always cool.
Oh how I fondly remember this sweet Parisian paradise
when days seemed to go on forever and on romantic nights she and I blended together.
Her name was Angelic.
She possessed the finest of French physique
and she seductively proved to me
that France was a land of romantic opportunity.
Her hugs and kisses lasted all thru the night
awakening each morning with the bright morning sun
to explore the fabulous city of Paris together in fun.
Me and this lovely young girl that just seemed to be the one.
She and her loveliness beckoning me to make Paris my home
in this place I felt so needed and never alone.
But wait there's more than meets the eye.
Love can provide happiness and love can watch you cry.
One day Angelic wanted to stay home
before she left for work she wanted to rest and spend some time alone.
I told her I would see her after her working hours
and went off to climb the Eiffel Tower.
As I previewed this magnificant tower view the skies were blue
and the clouds strangely unique
and soon my thoughts turned to my sweet Angelic.
It was then I noticed a telescope to pay for a view
so I dropped in a france, if only I knew.
The sight I view really took me by surprise
cause I could zoom in on Angelic's room right before my eyes.
They say don't spy on lovers cause you may not like what your eyes see.
They must be right cause my Angelic was kissing another man right before my eyes.
Definately couldn't be me cause I was way up high
standing on the Eiffel Tower in the Parisian sky.
There must be a logical explanation
so before I let my mind jump to a conclusion
I rushed home to confirm it was not as it seemed
perhaps only an illusion or a silly dream.
"Oh him, "His name is Pierre.
He knows all about me and you and he certainly doesn't care.
I was waiting to tell you when I felt the time was right.
He means nothing to me he only fulfills my sexual appetite.
You are the man I truly love as one would say we fit like a glove.
All the others are only seeking sexual gratification
you and I are making Love."
"All the others, how could this be."
I was mortified, I couldn't speak.
Heartbroken by my Angelic.
Come to find out there were thirty three
of course that total included me.
Come the evening dew the number fell to thirty two.
Au Revoir Angelic I'll miss you.
And now I'm glad I took the time to look within
to reflect where my life's going
and where I've already been.
Won't be flying to Charles De Gualle Airport after all.
The only Paris I'll be seeing
is the pictures I have placed upon my wall.

Jameslee@September27,2000
C'etait super....that was great
Encore une fois....let's do it again
J'aime ton derriere mon amour...I really
like your ass my Love...ha..my favorite
nymphomaniac...abnormal and uncontrolable
desire by a woman for sexual intercourse.


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catalinamoon
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1 posted 2000-10-27 08:13 PM


James, what a wonderful tale you have told. Well, if it was me, I would be running back there to see if she was  my true love after all, and then I would be getting kicked all the way down the Eiffel Tower.  So you, my friend, seem slightly more level headed. I bet this was a bit of a temptation though. Paris, young and in love, what could be better. Loved this.
Sandra

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
2 posted 2000-10-27 08:18 PM


Evening James,

What a story you have told. I enjoyed this one, and you do having many writing talents, from what I can see.

Bill

Ron K. Fox
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3 posted 2000-10-27 08:27 PM


oh what a story you have weaved. definitely top notch. I'm heading out for a croissant now. well maybe some stale french bread at the supermarket.
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2000-10-28 05:00 PM


Thank you Cat, Bill and Ron for the wonderful comments...James
SEA
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5 posted 2000-10-28 05:07 PM


James~ so that's what I am........"nymphomaniac...abnormal and uncontrolable desire by a woman for sexual intercourse."   No wonder my husband stays so happy!!   Excellent write my sweet friend.   -SEA
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6 posted 2000-10-28 06:32 PM


James..Dont know whether this is true or not but it was a fantastic read..i loved it..

               ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


JamesMichael
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7 posted 2000-11-01 04:52 AM


Thank you so much Sea and Victoria...Sea I imagine a nymph would do me just fine if she could remain faithful to me...James
2dalimit
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8 posted 2000-11-01 07:50 AM


OK! This one should be in paperback.
Vu Jade... (I have a feeling this has never happen to me before)
Melton

Charisma
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9 posted 2000-11-01 08:36 AM


I love this story.....
well done.

Charisma

SEA
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10 posted 2000-11-01 09:05 AM


James~ I stay faithfull to my husband..... -SEA
Paula Finn
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11 posted 2000-11-01 11:03 AM


James...oh you darlin...this was cute...especially liked the french thrown in...

Marsha
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12 posted 2000-11-01 11:19 AM


James, this is a brilliant read, absolutely great. Love the tale, really well written. I must be one of the few people who detest Paris, I been six times, well I suppose that's not many considering it's just a hop skip and a jump across the channel. But every single time I've been has been a nightmare. Oh yes now there's a memory I'd rather be without.  

Take care Mushy Marsha


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

JamesMichael
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13 posted 2000-11-17 04:04 PM


Thank you Melton, Charisma, Sea, Paula, and Marsha for reading and responding.
Sea that is the way it should be...yes...James

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