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I'm Really Missing You
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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I'm Really Missing You My empty lonely arms are lost, really missing you So lonely and sad, they wish so to hold on to you I want to go back to sleep, to dream my life away For only in my dreams I can hear you softly say That your love for me is, and will be ever strong It will last forever, and ever no matter how long * * * My lips are missing the gentle pressure of yours They want to kiss yours on those distant shores I've lost my weeping soul she's gone so far away I need to lie beside you to take this pain away Your touch is the medicine I so desperately crave To heal my spirit, in your hearts love I must bathe * * * My eyes are full of tears, and my soul is so blue I must see you soon before another day is through My eyes see no love in any other shape or form And my spirit feels wretched, like she's been torn It's only you that makes my days fill with light Only you I want in the dark of the starry night * * * My ears feel empty of your tender loving speech For when you speak it's my spirit that you reach I need to stroll beside you along that sunlit bay The touch of your smile is my sunshine this day This world seems to me a lonely and cold place And only you can put a smile back onto my face Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 Hugs, Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"My lips are missing the gentle pressure of your." These are my thoughts also...every kiss I share become a kiss I miss stirring up new desires...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ By far the loveliest of your heart songs. Oh, what an afternoon delight ... this is just such a pretty piece of writing. You've reached in and touched a soft spot ... it's very becoming.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, thank you love, much appreciated. I could do with a touch of sunshine, it wouldn't make me miss him less. Still things always seem better when the sunshines. So thanks for sending me so warm thoughts. MM James, yes that's the feeling, as if you're missing something vital. And in a way I am. Glad you like this one. Marge, thank you most kindly. It is a very soft spot, it's like a hole, a gap. And the missing piece is my man. I'm pleased you like this one, Marge I really am. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marsha~ Do you have any idea how beautiful this is? Oh girl, I love this sweet longing from you........ -SEA |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
So sad when you have to miss the one you love...but I've heard tell that abscence makes the heart grow fonder...and there is always the reunion to look forward to! Here's hoping that your hubby is home soon!! [This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 11-14-2000).] |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
It's amazing how even an hour, let alone a day, seems like a lifetime when missing a piece of your soul..... You wrote it so well; it carried me away Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Mushy, just think of how slushy you can get on his return. *HuGS* wonderful poem. write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, thank you love, but actually I thought that this failed to convey how much I miss my man. I always think I could do better if I tried harder you know. It's because I don't actually get the time to sit down and write them out, I'm always just grabbing some time from something else. I'm glad you like it, truly I am. Oh and did you get it last night, the OSCAR's have already been pestering me, hope you like it. I wouldn't trust them to send it because lord only knows what those apes would have done. Take care Mushy  BDC thank you, the reunion is something I'm looking forward too, very much. But it's not with my ex, now that wouldn't be a pleasant experience. I'm normally a gentle soul, and I do believe that the best way to part is as friends, but in his case I can make an exception. He tried to cut me off from joy and life, and then he tried to stop me reading and writing poetry, I don't think I can forgive him for that. To try to take beauty from my life and replace it with nothingness, is a crime of the heart.  Pepper too true girl, and time seems to misbehave, speeds up when you're with them, stops or rewinds when they're not. Ahh how I wish it were the other way round. Glad you like this one take care Kethry, thank you, and I intend to make it as memorable as possible. I'm pleased you like this one. Take care Slushy Mushy Marsha [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 11-15-2000).] |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marsha~ I got the card, I just can't figure out how to make the voice part go.......I'm computer stupid, mostly. I loved it just the same though, thank you!  -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, I'm glad you got it, mind you are you sure you want to hear the message I'm singing happy birthday. Mmm exactly. Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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