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Listen To The Raindrops
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Listen To The Raindrops |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Dip dip on my fingertips, I can hear raindrops on my head, Just listen carefully , listen to the raindrops, You can hear a beat of music on them, You can hear a song throuh the rain, Listen to the raindrops, Just listen to them, you will listen a tune of whistle through wind, Just listen to the raindrops, you will just wanna to sing through pain and mind, You listen raindrops carefully, And you will smile and laugh, All the time, you had just a good time, In the rain and you realise how precious was love to you, If you hear rain carefully, you will hear a whisper Into your ears, you will feel loved and realise just listening to the raindrops just makes you feel like a dream come true, |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I always love to listen to them on the attic roof and you're right they do seem to talk a peaceful message to you...very nice poem!! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Vandana~ the rain makes the best music.....it can be soft and light, or it can be wild and strong...love the rain and enjoyed this poem!  -SEA |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A lovely and most enjoyable poem ... My regards, Sudhir |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Vandana when I lived in Japan we had a tin roof and there is nothing like listening to the rain under a tin roof...does something to your heart...James |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I love the rain, and the way you show it. Contrary to James, I'd didn't have to go all the way to Japan, I just grew up in Louisiana and didn't know there was another kind of roof for years... jwesley |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I can hear them vandana. . . beautiful. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
So many songs can be heard in the melody of the rain...this was a comforting and peace filled poem...beautiful work~ |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Vandana, Oh Yes! They sound very beautiful. As Burt Bacarach once wrote "Raindrops keep falling on my head. They keep falling. Because I am free". Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Thank you all!!!!!!!!smiles!!!!!!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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