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Lost...looking...Found by Balladeer/Doreen
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Lost...looking...Found by Balladeer/Doreen |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA 
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( A small collaberation by Balladeer and Doreen Peri. Larger ones to follow  )there's sometimes a probably and sometimes a never sometimes a halfway toward the edge of forever there are probablys and nevers So we just have to cope with what our feelings tell us and how much we can hope sometimes there's hope sometimes there's not sometimes there's cold sometimes there's hot sometimes there's people lost inside a world so small yet way too wide people lost? Of course there are. It happens every day Columbus found America exactly in that way. He simply set a course by Jupiter or some other star and kept on going straight ahead and - Bingo! - here we are! |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, you two!! This is great!! Denise |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Not a small collaboration here! This has world wide written all over it! Very good.  |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hey...wow..this is great..two of my favorites in one...who could ask for more..I say sometimes there's hot!!! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Wonderful poem and very true. Poeminister |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I was expecting to feel sad after I read this but I didn't. Somehow it made me feel like there is hope for all of us. I think the collaberation is good for the both of you.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
there's sometimes a probably and sometimes a never sometimes a halfway toward the edge of forever there are probablys and nevers So we just have to cope with what our feelings tell us and how much we can hope =============== ooohh way cool... yes..PLEASE DO ...MORE bump those poetic heads together and collaborate away... one question...  ...hey deer...how did ya keep the queen so "brief" *smile* JUST KIDDING DOR!! you know I love how you do go on give us more to ponder from your dueting pens "Balladoreen" later-perfect-poetic-pairing-gators jm |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
 Enjoyed the collaborative write you two Look forward to more coming soon |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Denise....We thank you for your kindness deVine one..poem is small,,,the collaboration huge..our thanks Martie...sometimes there's hot and sometimes there's tango! Big thanks to ya!!! poetminister...thank you very much! inot2B..thank you for seeing the hope. We think so, too... JanetMarie....ROFL!! Balladoreen, indeed! It is just a little aDoraBallad You crack me up!! CoCoBaci....thank you! So do we... |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
Yet again another wonder peice. You two have such an amazing way with words. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is an incredible read...by "Jupiter" or by "Jove"--two of me favorite people. GROUP HUG? |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
I took a shot in the dark and I found myself holding the very hands of timelessness sub-space, supernatural... ... Doreen and Sir Balladeer, what a delightful combination... may many many more follow... regards, sudhir |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
And Bingo ... here you both are, and making wonderful words together. What a positive piece ... Bravo ... clapping here! Ahhh, two of my favorites, what a wonderful combination. This was wonderful you two! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Not only two of my favorites, but also two of my best cyber-friends in consort here... and it does work nicely... Superb job, you guys..  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
sometimes there's hope sometimes there's not sometimes there's cold sometimes there's hot sometimes there's people lost inside a world so small yet way too wide ---------------- this is so right.......excellent pennend, just as always. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 shining on both of you! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
A wonderful voice you two make! More, more, more! Corinne |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Bal & Dor- Loved this, I did! You two make an excellent team. I am looking forward to more of your works together. take care. ~amy~ "people lost? Of course there are. It happens every day Columbus found America exactly in that way. He simply set a course by Jupiter or some other star and kept on going straight ahead and - Bingo! - here we are!" This was my favorite verse. Really makes one ponder. Thanks! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
hey, you guys! thanks for reading this wee bit of spontanaeous verse.... we really enjoyed it ... and i'm glad y'all got something out of it, too (that's Virginia tawk!)hey, JM... what's with the "queen" thingy, anyway? queen of WHAT? the roller derby? nah... that can't be it... i don't even have any in-line skates...'course there seems to be a lot of standing in-line around here! er, or is that sitting online or... umm.. something er other... but i prefer figure skating... and am i usually too wordy??? MOI??? awwww come on, now... haven't you ever heard of the Iliad? there are such things as epics, y'know!! oh, and thanks very much for the collaberation, Michael... it was quite enjoyable... we'll have to do it again sometime, maybe, y'think? *wink*- all you can ever really ask out of life is a sincere apology and some decent poetry - |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
pretty cool |
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