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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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a silly little keats rhyme..from a while back made some changes.. Witch of black magic, they think she's a fool Wearing black beads, and magical chimes in cloak of night, practicing voodoo Inside a circle, candles and toadstools singing and chanting, voodoo rhymes a secret collection of puppets and pins Mixing her potions, a dash of bamboo Mixing into your tea, she watches and drools Turns you into a zombie, in a matter of time Dancing and playing, the tomboula drum too She puts you in a trance, making you spin stalking the cemetery,in the moonlight While under black magic, you will smile and grin Because you know it is better, then a vampires bite A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Good imagery. Enjoyed it. |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
agree with above, absolutely loved the imagery of this! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Victoria, intrigued by ''Voodoo'' and its origins, I found this to be a rewarding read. It spins with that trancing spirit! Robert Joseph |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
really kewl - where are you getting these pictures? where's the Gina Davis look alike picture I remember? |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
dragonpoe..thank you very much and welcome to Passions ..  hope you enjoydreamkeeper..thank you for taking time to read..appreciate your comments. Robert ..thank you im glad you enjoyed.. nice to hear from you as always.. Bill..i look like a raccoon in this one haa.. thanks bill..for peeking in.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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