Open Poetry #10 |
Soon My Love Soon |
kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Soon My Love Soon Counting the miles that separate us and gazing at the stars at night so close I feel to you there is no real distance between our hearts. Months seem like forever missing the one you Love but soon they will melt away anticipating the day we will see one another again. The days will pass too and what will be left nothing but hours counting the minutes till we embrace once more. As the minutes tick away they beat in rhythm keeping time with my heart Soon My Love Soon we will live our lives as one. 11-12-2000 -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
KitKat, You have read my mind with this poem. I feel this way all the time about my love. I love this one.. and I think I'm going to send it to him ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I hope it works out for you kitkat..heartfelt indeed.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
kitkat-- this is so beautiful! and you have NO idea how much it touched me. this is exactly how I feel about the love of my life who lives 1000 miles from me. May I please share this with her? Great write full of love and hope. Take care. ~amy~ |
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Mick Hawkes Member
since 2000-10-26
Posts 90Tees-side , England |
Great poem.. it struck a cord inside , i spent 12 years in the military and it ment a lot of time away from the one you love and it never got better!!.. mind you the reunions were great.. .lol A smile a day helps you work , rest & play. |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
rosepetals25-I am glad you enjoyed this. I am flattered you want to pass this one along Victoria- I am positive it will work--I move in Feb. Aimster-please feel free to share this--I am so full of happiness ) Mick-I understand Military my Dad was in it for 22 yrs..And Yes the reunions are great |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
You know when your hours together feels like seconds and your hours apart feel like days...that you are in love Beautiful work Kit...here's to a speedy reunion!! |
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eyesplus2 Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 163australia |
Wow........You cant realize just how much this is my life right now. My love is 14000 miles away from me and we are waiting for my visa to come so we can get married. It does count down....but the minuest seem like hours...the hours seem like days....and the days seem like forever. thankyou so much for this gift you gave me tonight. |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Wonderful finale! |
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