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kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
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Nova Scotia

0 posted 2000-11-13 09:03 AM


Soon My Love Soon

Counting the miles that separate us
and gazing at the stars at night
so close I feel to you
there is no real distance
between our hearts.

Months seem like forever
missing the one you Love
but soon they will melt away
anticipating the day
we will see one another again.

The days will pass too
and what will be left
nothing but hours
counting the minutes
till we embrace once more.

As the minutes tick away
they beat in rhythm
keeping time with my heart
Soon My Love Soon
we will live our lives as one.

11-12-2000


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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat you better
You're gonna find, yes you will
That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King



© Copyright 2000 Kathy Harmon - All Rights Reserved
rosepetals25
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1 posted 2000-11-13 09:12 AM


KitKat,

   You have read my mind with this poem.  I feel this way all the time about my love.  I love this one.. and I think I'm going to send it to him




~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

Victoria
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2 posted 2000-11-13 09:23 AM


I hope it works out for you kitkat..heartfelt indeed..

              ~Victoria~

              


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
3 posted 2000-11-13 10:34 AM


kitkat--

this is so beautiful! and you have NO
idea how much it touched me. this is
exactly how I feel about the love of my
life who lives 1000 miles from me. May
I please share this with her? Great write
full of love and hope. Take care.
~amy~

Mick Hawkes
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since 2000-10-26
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Tees-side , England
4 posted 2000-11-13 11:33 AM


Great poem.. it struck a cord inside , i spent 12 years in the military and it ment a lot of time away from the one you love and it never got better!!.. mind you the reunions were great.. .lol

A smile a day helps you work , rest & play.

kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 878
Nova Scotia
5 posted 2000-11-13 09:32 PM


rosepetals25-I am glad you enjoyed this. I am flattered you want to pass this one along

Victoria- I am positive it will work--I move in Feb.

Aimster-please feel free to share this--I am so full of happiness  )

Mick-I understand Military my Dad was in it for 22 yrs..And Yes the  reunions are great  

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
6 posted 2000-11-13 09:49 PM


You know when your hours together feels like seconds and your hours apart feel like days...that you are in love   Beautiful work Kit...here's to a speedy reunion!!
eyesplus2
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australia
7 posted 2000-11-14 12:23 PM


Wow........You cant realize just how much this is my life right now. My love is 14000 miles away from me and we are waiting for my visa to come so we can get married. It does count down....but the minuest seem like hours...the hours seem like days....and the days seem like forever. thankyou so much for this gift you gave me tonight.
Masked Intruder
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8 posted 2000-11-14 02:12 AM


Wonderful finale!
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