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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
You Carress me Touch softly my nights Whisper sweet everythings in my ear as smiles tug at the corners of my mouth and my eyes light up Surrounded in a peaceful love Depths I have craved for so long now And I explore with gentleness Cherishing each discovery Each moment Each breath You To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I can tell you were very absorbed in warm thought as you wrote this piece...very nice indeed!! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
beautiful! loved this part... "And I explore with gentleness Cherishing each discovery Each moment Each breath You" the whole poem was just lovely. take care. ~amy~  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is wonderful. . . a definite *sigh* here. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Dreamkeeper- Aren't those the best moments to write about? Luvdit! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
dreamkeeper..absolutely beautiful!! bravo! hugs, dg "so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
DK, Good write, compliments. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
Mmmmm... warm fuzzies and mooshies everywhere. This was lovely, dreamkeeper. Sweet and sensual... ~ Beth |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WoW!!! dreamkeep this is so beautiful and warm...very well penned. Loved the read Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
dreamkeeper, ~sighs~ These are the memories you never want to let go of. I enjoyed this poem ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Simply put...this is beautiful~ |
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