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eyesplus2
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0 posted 2000-11-13 01:16 AM



Hearts beat.......
Are you listening..........

In the Lane.........
Lovers are loving..........

What a wonderful sight........
Walking hand and hand with you.........

In the Chapel.........
We can build a life for two.........

They will say congrats............
Too you.......

Later on.........
A boy for me.........
A girl for you.......

We are happy today...........
Walking hand in hand for forevermore...........


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Paula Finn
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1 posted 2000-11-13 01:57 AM


Yep yep singing here
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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2 posted 2000-11-13 02:02 AM


Have to agree with Paula definitely can hear some singing here....like the old song... "going to the chapel and I'm gonna get married."   very good!!....ethome
Sven
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3 posted 2000-11-13 10:48 PM


break out the hearts. . .

excellent. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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