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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Trudging across land Crossing desert sand Feeling intense heat Permeating my feet Burning from within Pulsing yet again Waking from slumber Increasing in number The feelings awake Surrounding the lake Where dreams reside Deep down inside They slowly grow Escaping from below Reborn this day In a new way They flow free Beginning to be Healing my heart Throughout each part Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Wonderful poem! Nicely written. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude Upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." --Ed |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Lone Wolf, This is very beautiful. I liked it very much. "The feelings awake Surrounding the lake Where dreams reside Deep down inside" Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
they can take us there LW. . . excellent. . .  ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ 'Healing my heart' Whatever accelerates that process - I'm in favor of !  Love ya', gal. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Love this structure and style very well written poem....dreams are so important to peace of mind this is a lovely example! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
My dear friend...your poetry is soaring...I love the light that you have been writing with and continue to use as your tool for strength. Take care of you..as I will of me *AWH's & BFK's* |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Yes, soaring describes it well Another wonderful write, thanks for sharing Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
LW-- this is a truly beautiful poem! i love the concept here and the title! "They flow free Beginning to be Healing my heart Throughout each part" This is so true...dreams can do all this and more for us. Hugs to you my friend. Take care. ~amy~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love and enjoyed reading it. well done. Charisma |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
LW~ I enjoyed this very much....... -SEA |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
poeminister . . . Thank you and I am glad you enjoyed this. Daniel . . . Just came to me sort of. Thank you. Sven . . . I know they can my friend, I know. Sometimes when we least expect them to. Marge . . . Aw, you are so sweet my friend. I am in favor of healing too. Love ya'. ethome . . . Sometimes they are all we have. Happy to hear you enjoyed. It was a little stretch for me. BDC . . . Thanks for the compliments my friend. I think we are soaring together these days. The strength builds each day. I will take care of me and I am glad you are taking care of you. **AWH & BFK** Right back at ya!! Pepper . . . I thought soaring fit well there. Thank you!! Amy . . . Hang on to those dreams my friend. They may be your future someday. They have awesome powers. Thank you so much. Hugs to you too. Charisma . . . Thank you! SEA . . . Happy to hear that. Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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