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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2000-11-08 08:59 PM

     I can still feel your touch
     your fingertips...
     as they gently caress my face,
     the warmth of your breath
     delighting against my skin.

     I can still feel the softness
     of your lips pressed against mine,
     the feel of kisses placed there
     two bodies burning as one with desire.

     I can still feel our spirits
     as we held each other close,
     the way I was captured
     your eyes looking deep within.

     I can still feel the longing
     only between two,
     two bodies sharing
     such sweet release.

     I can still feel you
     here
     ~in my soul~
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On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free.

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 11-08-2000).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2000-11-08 09:03 PM

Very pretty, these linger.i.n.g feelings...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-11-08 09:09 PM

very beautiful....like a whispered secret
sensual and soft
lovely work...
take care
jm

ThUnDeRkYsS
Senior Member

since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

3 posted 2000-11-08 09:17 PM

Very beautiful indeed.

Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer.

Ron K. Fox
Senior Member

since 2000-10-24

Posts 925

4 posted 2000-11-08 09:18 PM

so deep within a feeling you've taken me. A delightful trip, like a whispered dream. Wonderfully written.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

5 posted 2000-11-08 09:29 PM

Beautifully expressive.
Sandra

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2000-11-09 07:33 PM

Sunshine, the feelings that linger......the ones that hold our hearts. Thank You.

Janet, it is a feeling not to be kept secret.  It is a beautiful feeling.  Thanks!

Thunder  ~brite smiles~  Thank you.

Ron, so glad my words could take you on a trip for a quiet moment. Thank you.

Catalin, the expression comes from the love shown. Thank you.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2000-11-10 03:09 PM

This work is very soft, beautiful and deep...great poetry!!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

8 posted 2000-11-12 09:32 PM

ethome, thank you so much for the kindness of your words.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2000-11-13 10:51 PM

then the feeling is true. . .

wonderful. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

10 posted 2000-11-13 11:11 PM

GS* Such a tender display of love with heart and soul. Very beautiful writing~

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