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Unto You
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Unto You |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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*Unto You* Stars fall by night- Melt into moonlight. Ever hidden from view “Neath clouded rays- Your beauty slays. There is no substitute Caught in sweet mist- Of lover’s bliss. Rein upon my soul Drown me, this passion- Of your own fashion. Henceforth, it has been told Mark my willing lips- With your tempest kiss. Shadower of my fondest heart Belie not my wit- With Destiny’s fit. Of a Love unable to start Melt into my senses- Be adorable, relentless. As I bind myself only to you Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hey Devina... Nice work.. You've got a great theme and a really superb format here.. I like it... and it's really nice to see you posting...  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Devina~ yes, it's great to see your name up on the blue pages.........  This is beautiful.....I really like the feel of it. -SEA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*sigh*. . . You already know what I think about this one. . . welcome back. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ Hello there, sweet poet. So nice to have you drop in ... and this is just the beauty to do it with ! I like the way the rhyming scheme falls. Lovely, dear lady ... just lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely poem Devina..and it is really nice to see you here again. Welcome home.  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Okay. . . this one's going back. . . to be seen again. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i echo what everyone has said..loved it ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
devina, this was a most enjoyable treat... love that last line, evokes great images... Parker |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nice poem. I liked it |
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Nicole Senior Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835Florida |
It's good to see you back and posting! I've always enjoyed your work, and this is no exception. Well done! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
devina i sure am glad i dragged my sorry butt in here not that i dragged it or that indeed i do have a sorry butt but yuh good seein yuh nice poem look for more |
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