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devina
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0 posted 2000-11-12 06:38 PM



*Unto You*

Stars fall by night-
Melt into moonlight.
Ever hidden from view

“Neath clouded rays-
Your beauty slays.
There is no substitute

Caught in sweet mist-
Of lover’s bliss.
Rein upon my soul

Drown me, this passion-
Of your own fashion.
Henceforth, it has been told

Mark my willing lips-
With your tempest kiss.
Shadower of my fondest heart

Belie not my wit-
With Destiny’s fit.
Of a Love unable to start

Melt into my senses-
Be adorable, relentless.
As I bind myself only to you




Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


© Copyright 2000 Tanya Nicole Bustamante - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2000-11-12 06:45 PM


Hey Devina... Nice work.. You've got a great theme and a really superb format here.. I like it... and it's really nice to see you posting...
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Devina~ yes, it's great to see your name up on the blue pages......... This is beautiful.....I really like the feel of it.   -SEA
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3 posted 2000-11-12 09:33 PM


*sigh*. . .

You already know what I think about this one. . . welcome back. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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4 posted 2000-11-12 10:45 PM


Devina~
Hello there, sweet poet.
So nice to have you drop in ...
and this is just the beauty to do it with !

I like the way the rhyming scheme falls.
Lovely, dear lady ... just lovely.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2000-11-12 11:34 PM


Lovely poem Devina..and it is really nice to see you here again. Welcome home.  
Sven
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6 posted 2000-11-13 10:49 PM


Okay. . . this one's going back. . . to be seen again. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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7 posted 2000-11-13 10:57 PM


i echo what everyone has said..loved it

               ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Parker
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8 posted 2000-11-14 11:00 AM


devina, this was a most enjoyable treat...
love that last line, evokes great images...

Parker

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9 posted 2000-11-14 11:11 AM


Nice poem. I liked it
Nicole
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10 posted 2000-11-14 12:34 PM


It's good to see you back and posting!  I've always enjoyed your work, and this is no exception.  Well done!  
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11 posted 2000-11-14 12:38 PM


devina i sure am glad i dragged my sorry butt in here not that i dragged it or that indeed i do have a sorry butt but yuh good seein yuh nice poem look for more
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