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Moon Dust
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0 posted 2000-11-12 09:59 AM


11th hour and slience adorns,
Gentle reminders of the nightmare persues,
What can only imagine the screams born,
To all who took their lifes for new,

11th hour and 5 minutes gone by,
Suddenly darkness fills the room,
The way it was very dark days to try,
But you won our freedom to never endure,

11th hour soon passes,
Back to busy lifes it is,
I wont wait till next year,
To remember what you did.


Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


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1 posted 2000-11-12 10:32 AM


A most timely reminder, the day after the 11th day of the 11th month and 11th hour to never forget...lest we forget...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



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2 posted 2000-11-12 10:34 AM


Thanks sunshine

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


ethome
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3 posted 2000-11-12 10:37 AM


Beautiful little mystery here ...wonderful word flow...very good!
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4 posted 2000-11-12 12:11 PM


Wonderful work, Maria! I liked this one a lot.

Elizabeth


You cling to your ways and leave mine to me.
Suum cuique.
~Elizabeth



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5 posted 2000-11-12 12:20 PM


Thanks for helping us remember, Maria.

To love another person is to see the face of God.
- Les Miserables

Marilyn

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6 posted 2000-11-12 02:26 PM


Thank you all so much

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


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7 posted 2000-11-12 10:00 PM


to never forget. . .

thank you Maria. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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8 posted 2000-11-13 07:31 PM


Sven - And  thanks for your msg

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


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