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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Poetic Infusion ~*Marge Tindal*~ I've been hit by an epidemic of poetic infusion Call the doctor - start the transfusion One liter of sonnet that softly drips One meter of rhyme to fall from my lips A sip of Villanelle verse to revive Why, you might even keep this poet alive No more am I under any false illusion Please tend me quick with poetic infusion Administer one shot of soft serenade song while I am still able to sing loudly along One dose of a ballad, thrown in for good measure and do not forget a Paradelle treasure Think me not a mere allusion infused with poetic confusion There are those who would agree there is no cure for a romantic like me Do not lament if I fall into free-verse for I fear there is no cure for this curse Chart the rise in my delusion grandest in poetic inclusion If these poetic thoughts continue to swell Lock me within a padded cell Give me the cure or bury me quick for I've never been so well - at being so sick Summon the surgeons to confer in conclusion I am one classic case of poetic infusion Forgive me for hanging on to notion that poets are filled with tremendous devotion Until you find a better solution just stock me up with poetic profusion ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, laughing, giggling, rolling on the floor. Excellent. This goes into my library. Be well Kethry Btw I'll have what you're having. Keth Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
PoetMarge, you got me on the seat of my chair with such a big grin  I so much enjoyed reading this one you wrote... "U r 1 classy case of poetic infusion" [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 11-11-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
you are a delightful read, every time. And I could you use a dose of that, myself!!! Thanks for the smiles, Marge! |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Keep passing round what you're serving; you're inspiring more of what you're deserving!!! This is just great!!! Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- LOL...i'm loving this! you've taken my mind on a poetic merry-go-round...  so much fun to read. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Marge this is wonderful and so much fun... I don't think anyone has as much fun as you do with your play on words metaphors...ah Marge! the world's just a better place with you in it.......keep up the poetic profusion...this one is just a marvelous work!! ethome |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge this is so much fun, and I am laughing loudly at this. They say laughter is the best medicine, and this is the best of the lot. Love this one Marge I really do. Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Marge, This malady you're suffering from must follow but one rule of thumb between fore-finger that's opposed just grasp the pen , you're one of those who holds the cure within her grasp to make us laugh until we gasp for air , and then wait patiently for what comes next , most pensively. Doc P.S. In case you couldn't tell , I thought this was fantastic ! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Where does one line up for such a transfusion? "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Don't know where you come up with this stuff Marge. Thanks for the chuckle. This was great! jwesley |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Shoot! Now I've got to check with my HMO and PPO to see if I am covered when I check into THIS hospital for that much-needed transfusion of infusion of poetry and prose... HELP, where's that darn CALL button!!! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Marge, You have this running through your vains, well could you be doner please, Girl don't you ever STOP being YOU, my life would just never be the same I needed this awesome read this morning, im smiling all the way to the coffee pot of coarse!! hehe love lots, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ Uh-Oh ! You've got the symptoms ! Dani~ Thanks for the diagnosis ! Serenity~ I think it's spreading ! PepperMint~ Sharing and loving it ! Thanks. Vicky~ Yah ! Well, I think I picked it up on the playground at Passions ! ETHome~ Thanks, buddy. I love it when someone tells me that ! I do have fun ! Marsha~ Yep - that laughter will get you everytime. DrMoose~ Now, Doc - if I read you right, all I have to do is have that pen amputated and I'm cured ! ! WOW ! All the other doc's could have used you at the conference. LOL ! EagleOne~ Jeez .. I'm seeking a cure and you want to catch it ?? Hmmmmmm ! Maybe we should just bottle it ! JWesley~ Beats me, babe ! But close proximity with other poets is strongly suspected ! Karilea~ Oh - forgot to mention - FREE research is being done at DrMoose's clinic !  Cerenity~ Hey ! Thanks ! I never thought of a donor card ! GREAT idea ! *Thanks to all of you for putting up with my obvious infectious frivolity ! *Hugs* around for all ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
My sleeve is rolled up, my eyes are tightly closed...GIVE IT TO ME YEAHHHHHH Don't close your eyes to the possibilities |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ I did get a little giggle at your reply - especially when I looked at your signature comment. LOL ! 'Don't close your eyes to the possibilities' Well, thank you, my friend ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Send me a pint or two, will ya, Marge? This is very creative! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ See ! I CAN sell it ! Sure, gal - want the super-duper stuff ? LOL ! This one was pure fun ! (but then that's the fun of being sick.) ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
And where in the blazes have I been... So much missed reading your delightful poems, My friend.... regards O Marge, Sudhir |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Margie girl Loud applaus from this side of the screen...well penned my friend, so very funny and tremendously creative Thanks for the laugh ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Marge, If you had any more profusion, this forum would burst. Thanks for waking me up with a laugh. I love your profusion - Just keep them coming. Liz |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Personally... I think you need a glass of slow juice every morning. I may be able to get a better grip on life at the forum. You ever heard that saying "to much of a...thing" I didn't think so... Nice again Marge... lucky dale |
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