Open Poetry #10 |
The Nights |
Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Quiet nights echo nothing but the tinkering of rain slow and steady no sound of ceasing, just on and on like the crystal clear tears trailing with no direction from my eyes at night mostly when I'm just too tired to think beyond images and sounds here and there in my mind softer and softer as exhaustion overtakes and the heaviness of sleep blankets me softly again To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dream, you make one taste the salt, and feel the exhaustion... Welcome to Passions! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
reminds me of some of the nights i've been havingh lately. beauiful tho Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
to know that the tears that are cried are nothing like the tears that I cry. . . wonderful. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Lovely piece. I hope your dreams a sweet ones. -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Very nice poem. Moving and rich with emotion. |
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