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Magnetic Tides |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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"Magnetic Tides" Like the tides of the ocean Your eyes pull me to you I am helpless...spellbound As I gaze into those pools of blue The magic within them Takes my breath away Feeling the essence of my soul Being swept away Crystal blue persuasion As your eyes call out my name Feeling the power consume me Knowing I'll never be the same Like a tidal wave I feel myself drowning in your reflection But they are so calm and beautiful I know I need no protection Your eyes say to me What your words can not And those pools of blue Have forever captured my heart Amy M Kennedy |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Crystal blue pursuansion, yeah. One of my all time favorite songs. Definitely feel the pull into the blue here! Corinne |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Amy I enjoyed reading you write yourself into those pools of blue...yes siree this is indeed a lovely little gem of poetry and you should be proud! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy, this is such a beautiful poem, the eyes are so important, they will always tell you the truth. Really love this, beautifully written and so full of love. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Like the tides of the ocean Your eyes pull me to you I am helpless...spellbound As I gaze into those pools of blue The magic within them Takes my breath away Feeling the essence of my soul Being swept away' Wow, Aim. I'm not sure, but I might have a new contender for my favorite! Whew. Well, it's definitely a hard choice, ya know. So, let me go decide. Excellent write, my friend! Love it!! sp I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Corrine-- of of my favorite songs too. glad you liked. thanks for your wonderful reply. ethome...ya trying to make me blush  thanks for being your sweet self. your reply meant a lot to me. thank you. marsha-- you are beautiful. yes the eyes say A LOT. much more than words even do. thank you for your always sincere and wonderful reply. take care. kris== a new favorite? geesh lady...trying to give me a big head LOL. seriously thank you for your kind words and wonderful friendship. take care all and once again thank you! ~amy~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The magic within them Takes my breath away Feeling the essence of my soul Being swept away Crystal blue persuasion As your eyes call out my name Feeling the power consume me Knowing I'll never be the same =============== nothing like being swept and drowning is there Amy-girl "Crystal blue persuasion" perfect...puuuuurfect love seeing this side of you later-magentic-gator hehe me |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
this was so beautiful Amy..loved it..  ~Victoria A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Amy, The ocean never loses its allure...and your words follow suite, very much enjoyed! Robert Joseph |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Aimster - you've captured the feeling perfectly - - a shame we males cannot capture that feeling in words - guess we blush too easily |
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