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Wishful Morning Star (2000th post) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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A little douse Of surreality As I look up The midnight sky The starry heavens Are the poets’ wish Coming ever true I realize To touch the hearts Of so many lives The stars a gift To be their eyes How can I see The distant shores If I’ve never seen the sea You are there Above the beach I can hear your poetry The net that’s cast By God Himself Are heaven’s stars Up in the sky And each poet knows That for one to shine We shall never die There’s no Goodnight For the poet’s light Shines even At its rest And to share with you My dreams come true Is when I'm at my best I’ll listen as You reflect Your soul To the world Of who you are So the others and I Can help you light Your wishful Morning Star [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 11-13-2000).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
OH!! Walt this is absolutely beautiful..just gorgeous..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"And each poet knows That for one to shine We shall never die." Very touching words you have shared..James |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Walt, I must agree with James. This is a touching piece of poetry. Wonderful really. And congratulations on your posts Rainydays [This message has been edited by Rainydays (edited 11-11-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
wayoutwalt, congratulations on the 2000th post. This is a sensitive, caring, loving and passionate side of you that I don't see too often.i loved this as I love all facets of your personality as revealed through your poetry. Write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanks guys it took me forever to hit the big 2000. i'm happy to be here yuh. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"How can I See distant shores If I’ve never seen the sea You are there Above the beach I can hear your poetry" Congratulations! How I loved these verses, the entire piece, but these verse spoke personally to me as well. Keep up the writing. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
How can I See distant shores If I’ve never seen the sea You are there Above the beach I can hear your poetry Walt, firstl congrads on the 2ooo th post. an excellent poem beautifully written very tender, I especially connected with the above verse. < !signature--> "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith [This message has been edited by brian madden (edited 11-11-2000).] |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Nicely donee, love the theme, I'll be wishing some tonight Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i'm glad ya'll liked that stanza big smiles |
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elisaseyes Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 196fort worth texas |
I wrangled the computer from Mister 2000. Great job hubby |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Congratulations!!! A lovely poem sir... |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanx sweet i'll turn my head to the right and tell yuh more... pdv you were there for me from the start sniff |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Congratulations Walty on your 2000th post Alovely poem indeed Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Congrats walt, keep 'em coming. You're versatile as you are witty. i always enjoy your writes. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ You're such a thoughtful poet/friend. 'The net that’s cast By God Himself Are heaven’s stars Arrayed up in the sky And each poet knows That for one to shine We shall all never die' The congratulations are yours - the pleasure ours. Thank you for being here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Your star shines bright!!! Congrats on the 2000th post! You keep writing; I'll keep reading Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Walt, you are TWO GRAND!!! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh Walt, ya made me cry reading such beautiful words you write... YUP YUP... well here ya go mon ami... *** FELICITATIONS *** on 2000th I treasure each of your poems that I have had the pleasure to read at nite... Dani It's being threaded 4 keepers |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You are a gift I give myself each time I read one of your poems...may you gist me with 2000 more. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
you guys are all too sweet (gigglin at the deer) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Well dear Walt CONGRATULATIONS to ya  well done on your 2000th post This my friend is truly a beauty, filled with an abundance of imagery...well written Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
WOW, you know I love you and all of your nuances...but this particular side of you is extremely pleasing... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Well, walt.. This is definitely GRAND X TWO...  |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
sunshine and tracie thanky thanky nan sorry after the housework i fell asleep |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Excellent write for your 2000th Walt! This is just simply very very good poetry ...impressive...take care...ethome CONGRATS!!! |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Any poet should appreciate this one. 2000th post, eh? Guess I have a lot of reading to do! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Walt, Congratulations on your 200th post!!!!!! Great poem to mark the occasion. Well done. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
ethome and dragon poe im so glad you liked it yuh i tried to do well for big 2000 thats 2000 not 200 lone wolf silly yuh hehe |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Walt, This was an excellent post for your 2000th. Congratulations! May your poetry continue to be as great as it has so far! *Jenn* My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
W.O.W.* You wrote from your poets heart in this one!! Someone kept the chocolate hid  This is excellent and Congrats to yuh! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
You have celebrated in fine style with this marvelous work.< !signature--> "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. [This message has been edited by EagleOne (edited 11-13-2000).] |
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