Open Poetry #10 |
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Do You Remember? (our first kiss |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC ![]() |
"Do You Remember" (our first kiss) Do you remember our first kiss...I surely do as though it were yesterday You were sitting there staring at me with those beautiful eyes And my heart got swept away And I let down my guard, and released a sweet sigh I was shaking inside, never felt like that before So scared to open my eyes, and the dream would end My heart took on wings and to the heavens it did soar I heard Angels sing, on enchanting wind I was amazed at the intensity of the feeling It almost took the breath from me With my heart stopped, my senses were reeling And I wished it would last an eternity That kiss meant the world to me, it set me free As your arms wrapped around me, my soul you did release And I realized all we've been through, was meant to be And our love was just beginning, never would it cease I opened my eyes as we pulled a little apart You tried to say something but nothing came out But you spoke volumes with your heart And I at once knew you felt the same as I, there was no doubt Now here we are months later, and so much has been revealed Our hearts we share everyday, you are my forever soul-mate On that day our future with a kiss was sealed And it was then with destiny we had our first date Your kisses still melt my heart and set my soul on fire Passion blazed by love, and a overwhelming desire Till the ends of time, you will be my only one And from our first kiss, this beautiful love was begun |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Amy~ He's one lucky guy to have captured your sweet heart. This is just precious and endearing. Best to you, gal. As always, my friend. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Yes that special first kiss, how can we forget. This is beautiful Amy ![]() Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I heard Angels sing, on enchanting wind ================= well it doesnt get much better than this does it amygirl.. and that last verse...said it all... this is sweet and endearing kiss from you ![]() beautiful sincere and SO YOU ... later-sunshine-gator jm |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Precious and loving sentiments in the poem and sweet passion in the kiss The spark that lights the fire Liked this alot Liz |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy, such a tremendous passion and love that shines through this poem. Our heart we share everyday, you are my forever soul-mate On that day our future with a kiss was sealed These lines are my favourite, they just sing to me. I love this one Amy it's beautiful. Take care Mushy Marsha ![]() Isn't love wonderful ![]() Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Aimster girl the beauty in this is just amazing, you have portrayed you heart here magnificently...well written sweetie ![]() ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Awwww you guys are too much...make a girl blush really ![]() words...means everything to me! Take care. Amy ![]() |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
There is nothing better in the world than a first kiss! Your poem is almost like a kiss, sweet and tender!!! ![]() |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'I opened my eyes as we pulled a little apart You tried to say something but nothing came out But you spoke volumes with your heart And I at once knew you felt the same as I, there was no doubt' Aim, this is so romantic. I absolutely love this one, girlie. Beautiful write, my friend!! ![]() sp I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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