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A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2000-11-10 01:14 PM


A Soft Whispered Sigh…

The fear in my heart holds me at a distance,
where love is just beyond my reach

the sadness which lives in my eyes, clouds my view
of the genteel, virtuous soul

the many reminders of villainous behavior
are played de novo like a song in my mind

the melancholy which has become my dwelling
keeps me incarcerated in darkness….

But auspiciously…

the freedom of my spirit allows me to soar
through daytime dreams, where romance is felt
in the touch of one’s hand, and love is found in
a soft whispered sigh.

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Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul.

[This message has been edited by A Whisper's Caress (edited 11-10-2000).]

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wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
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1 posted 2000-11-10 01:20 PM


whispered caress i loves it yuh daytime dreams yuh

Say it with me!
"This poem was awesome! Terrific! Totally exciting!"



A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03
Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale
2 posted 2000-11-11 01:06 AM


Walt,
thanks for the kind comments  


Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
3 posted 2000-11-11 01:12 AM


A Whisper's Caress:  Oh my!! this is truly beautiful writing - I am in awe of your talents - please write more for me to read and learn   Roniece
Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada
4 posted 2000-11-11 01:22 AM


Whisper, this one brightens up so nicely.  Always love the getaway of daydreaming.

take care,
-Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude
Upon thy slumber shall intrude,
Our thoughts, our souls- O God above!
In every deed shall mingle, love."
--Ed

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
5 posted 2000-11-12 01:22 PM


Beautiful thoughts stirred to perfection..very nice work!!
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