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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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i remember i saw you < !signature-->in the Pepsi aisle every Tuesday stacking the shelfs i wish every Pepsi man looked like you..mmmm right on scedule..nine thirty a.m. i couldnt wait to get to the grocery store my heart pounded..knowing how disappointed i would be if i didnt see you.. How i loved Pepsi or was it you i loved to watch? i remember bending next to you picking up a six pack.. i thought maybe my perfume would of attracted you.. but you didnt look up. i knew you were younger alot younger tall and as skinny as a marathon runner at first you didnt notice me you always had your head down and never looked my way paying attention to your job About the third time i saw you.. i walked by thinking how good looking you were you looked like Bob Goen on Entertainment tonight then one Tuesday you stood talking to someone as i pushed my cart by pretending i didnt notice you i could tell you had no idea you were movie star material i watched you as you listened to the man you were talking to then your ocean eyes glanced my way and you nodded and smiled.. i couldnt believe it you finally caught me looking at you.. i gave you a smile like you had never had before one that you would remember until you saw me again Every Tuesday your eyes seduced me they said "sleep with me" and mine said "yes take me now" i was drawn to you like a magnet Did you want me to make the first move? What if i did? I will always wonder..What if??.. A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 11-13-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Victoria, the eyes have it. What an unusual way to have a casual affair.Loved the what if. write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
*opens up his pepsi and takes a drink*  i liked this one. i have tried this before. not with the pepsi man of course very good writing. *hugs* so you like younger ones huh?? hmmmmmmm i loved it hun.love ya jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Too bad he wasn't the Coca-Cola man--- you could have had a Coke and a smile... Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
kethry..yes..more unusual then the produce department ha..thanks kethry..ya just never know do ya.. jesse..well he would be ten yrs older now ha..but so am i..at leat ten yrs older..i would really be robbing the cradle with you..ha..you cute little devil  jamie..i guess he could tell i was really a uncola kind of girl ha... ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
hehe i worked at a grocery store and yes the pepsi guys always look better than the coke guys but gimme a coke anyday to drink yuh fun poem |
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Words_of_Glitter Member
since 2000-10-25
Posts 90USA |
This was awesome, i liked it, and i can't expand anymore. sorry, it's too late for my brain to work properly |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Walt..i shopped in foodland..it was in hawaii..but yes he had them all beat haa.. coke men ..potato chip men.. etc .... words of glitter..so glad you enjoyed...thanks for peeking in.. appreciate your comments.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Really enjoyed reading your little adventure Victoria...I do this everywhere I go...the supermarket, restaurants, art studio's, can never keep my eyes off the lovely ladies...he definately wanted you to make the first move cause he was working and needed a break...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
ocean eyes...such a beautiful expression, guess I should begin checking that aisle out the next time...I too, am an uncola kind of woman though..*s don't need any caffeine in my system to get me going.  ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
James..well that was a first for me..ive never set my alarm for anyone yet and probably never will again haa.... thanks JamesNT..I cant understand why he wasnt over at universal studios..with tom selleck..cause he was there too at the time i lived there.. thanks ms naked.~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Victoria - There's a checkout clerk at my local supermarket - i kid with often - I once made her blush when I told her she keeps my fantasies alive ~G~ - I understand completely - good one |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
I think everyone experiences something like this once in their lifetime. That fire that can never be kindled. This was a joy to read. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Oh Victoria you little deviless you! I really had some fun travelling this story through the verses.......and if a girl with ocean eyes glanced my way .....well..well.. I'd ...I'd... just have go somewhere and sit on my hands....as Walt would say...yuh yuh.... Have a good one...ethome |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Victoria, I love this little adventure.... can imagine how it looks like.... love it, ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Geesh..... I had some fun reading this one... this isn't exactly the ending I expected though... Now get back there next week and make a move... ask a silly "Pepsi" question... Do SOMETHING.... LOL... What a fun poem..  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
ha..Somebody has to do those groceries..its been down hill in the grocery store ever since.haa Im moving back to hawaii haa... dragonpoe..If only haa..kicking myself thank you for reading dragonpoe.. ethome..im one of these silly ladies that likes the man to make the first move ha..thats what i get..what ifs ha.. Charisma..yes..everytime i see bob goen i think of him ..thanks charisma..nice to hear from you.. HugsNan..Buying my ticket back to hawaii ha..Foodland here i come ha.. thanks Nan..~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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