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Annies' Prayer...two years later
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Annies' Prayer...two years later |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You really should read Annies' Wish before this Hi God its Annie How are You up there? I have a favor to ask You If You have a moment to spare. I know mommy's there Up in heaven with You Can You tell her about us How we're starting brand new? See daddy has found A new mommy for me I still love my old one God She is special to me. I know daddly still loves her Theres nights he still cries But more often now There's joy in his eyes. She loves us both And God I like her too And I really believe She's an angel from You God could You tell my mommy That I love her so And I'll never forget her I just wanted her to know This Christmas Eve is special Because God You see Tonight he's gonna ask her To marry him and me And God I know We will be truly blessed If You could just get her To please say yes So God this is Annie Its time for me to go Tell my mommy I love her And I miss her so Merry Christmas to You God And all Your angels too Merry Christmas from Annie And God?...Thank You. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula, this is beautiful, totally wonderful. I really and truly love this one. I did read Annie Wish, which I loved too, and now this one is absolutely fabulous. You write so beautifully Paula you really do. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ So simplistically beautiful - the prayers of a child. Thank you for sharing this delight. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wonderful set of poems showing the hell a child would go thru losing a parent thru death or divorce and then the appreciation she shows when blessings come her way and life now seems worth living again...sometimes a very hard thing for a child to let go and accept a new parent...James |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
This is so beautiful; brought tears to my eyes... I would like to say a quiet thank you Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
The tears just keep coming. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Crying buckets, here. This is the perfect complement to Annie's Wish. Fabulous writing, Paula! Denise |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Marsha...your replies always just make me smile...thank you Marge...thank you James...yes but every kid deserves two loving parents...be nice if wishing could make it so Pepper...yes inot2B...thank you for that dsnyder...it wrote itself as soon as Annies' Wish was on paper...thank you |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is a very beautiful piece Paula, great job! Nathan |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Nathan thanks Im glad you like it |
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