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A Poem for the Pot!
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A Poem for the Pot! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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(Hi....if you've gotten this far, then you are the type of person who should read this.....a person with a humorous outlook on life!! Have fun, and don't forget to put the lid back down!!)  Moments of contemplation, are best done sitting down... I've come upon solutions, To problems that abound... While sitting quietly upon my porcelain throne of white... My reading room's a personal place of contemplative delight! It's stocked with reading material, Books and 'zines from everywhere... There's always pen and paper, You can write while sitting there... The seat is plush, you sink right in, and set your spirit free... Not to mention, it's the place to go, if you really have to pee! I've thought up many a story, I've written many a poem... Sitting in the reading room, within my meager home... I listen to the wind outside, while Nature's calling me... The pot connects me back to Earth, and finally back to Sea... So, don't just think of your bathroom as the place you have to go... It has such grand potential, It's a space where you can grow... I hope I've opened up your eyes, To all the potential it's got... This wonderful room, a get-a-way, as perceived in this poem for the pot!!  Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 09-27-2000).] |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Poetry in motion.........takes on a different meaning now.......  Jon |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Jon... Never thought about that, but it works!!! Ha!!! Glad you dropped in!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sunny is that what is meant by a flowing motion? I really like this it's made me smile. I was going to say it's got your hallmark stamped all over it, but I better not. Oh I do like this, I'll chuckle before I go to sleep. |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
Cute, quite funny realy. Great to read. Keith Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Marsha... Good.....my intent was to focus in on something we all have in common, and can laugh about. I believe the world is in desperate need of laughter!! So, if I made you chuckle...I am happy!! Thank you, too!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Keith... Glad you liked this one!! I wrote it in the bathroom!! Ha!! Thank you for dropping by! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wow...should I say that this one really "moved" me or just that it made me a little "flush"....either way just know that it was a fun #1 to read and that makes#2 of yours that I have read today. Enjoyed my friend. I am searching for chuckles and you have provided some. Thanks |
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AngelEyes Junior Member
since 2000-09-27
Posts 14Wisconsin, US |
ahahahaa It made me go to the bathroom! lol It flows so well... ahahaha and made me laugh so hard I HAD to read it again! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sunny--I loved this...made me want to redo my bathroom and get one of those warm squishy toilet seats...maybe a little stereo and of course, a book case....yup! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Mark.... I am glad that I gave you a few HaHa's, and you had fun with it!! That's what it was all about, anyway. So good to see you!! Hi AngelEyes.... I guess now I should tell you that the little guy on the pot is supposed to be Bill Gates!! Makes him seem more human, doesn't it? Thank you!!! Hi Martie.... Yep, you need all those things in your 'reading room', including some hanging spider plants, (they love steam), and some jade plants. Go ahead....turn it into your ideal get-away place!! It's the most versatile room in the house!! Thank you for your reply!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
LOL ... Wonderful Sunny! Great grins for my evening read ... much enjoyed this porcelain poem, and the graphic too!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
geesh... guess i got it wrong when i clicked... i was ready to light one up... oh well *g enjoyed the read miss sunny delight ~ all you can really ever expect out of life is a sincere apology and some decent poetry ~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Kit.... Isn't there a remarkable resemblance to Bill Gates in the little man? Glad you liked this one....it was a kick to write...somtimes I just gotta let 'er rip, so to speak!! thank you!!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi doreen.... Sorry about the misleading title, but then again.....it could be inter-changeable, as you can do one in the other, and it's really cool to do one in the other in a bubble bath with music, and a glass of wine..........oh, boy........ I'm glad you stopped in to visit!!!  < !signature-->Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 09-28-2000).] |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
Cute. Do you keep your most favorite pen in there with you? |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Siofra.... Yep...my favorite pen goes where I go!! You never know when inspiration will hit you over the head, so I always have a pen and something to write on. (Toilet paper ain't that great!!) Ha!! Ha!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I sure am glad you decided to share this one instead of flushing it away! From now on I'll do my most serious work on the POT!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
AAGGHH...I'm always in the shower....but I do know a few atty's who could take their laptop in with them if they could... Sunny1...love your wit! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Sunny1,you always impress me by your writing,everytime I read your poetry,I loved it.!!!!!!!  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
inot2B... Ah....just relax and 'set your spirit free'! Glad to see you!! Sunshine... Sometimes one has to think deeply to instigate humor in their muse!! So glad to see you anytime!! vandana... and I'm always impressed by yours!! Poetic feedback is as necessary to all of us, as breathing is to everyone else. You inspire me, also!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This poem always makes me smile! I had a copy printed and taped up in the bathroom at my old place....think its time to do that again! |
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