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Do You Whisper My Name?
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Do You Whisper My Name? |
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Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada 
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Do You Whisper My Name? In the dark of the night, do you whisper my name? Do you call to me softly in dreams far away? Do I come to your side, and partake of your heart? Do we bask in the heat as our passions impart? Do you murmur the words that I'm yearning to hear? Do I answer you softly with words to endear? Do our bodies entwine in the heat of the night? Do we satisfy longings as spirits unite? Do you gently caress all my worries away? Do I fall then to slumber till break of new day? In the dawn of the morn, do you reach out in vain, To discover ... 'twas only a dream that remained? /Kit McCallum . [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 10-01-2000).] |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
What a wonderful dream Kit!!!! So gently and tenderly written. Beautiful!!! Bonnie |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
Oh Kit this is beautiful. This has touched my heart in a personal way, as it is a dream I have had many times. Thank You. ......beth "And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..." - REA |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Kit, This is an awesome dream you have written of. I think we have all been there at one time or another . . . only to wake up alone the next day and say wow it seemed so real!!  Great writing here.Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
O for an icon that denotes two hands clapping... Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Kit~ beautiful writing you have penned here! sweet sentiments from your heart indeed. i always love reading your work and here is a perfect example why. take care. amy "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Kit, I like this poem So tenderly written.. I know I have wondered these exact things many times in the past.~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Have awoken many a time from this dream, wishing to fall back asleep..... thank you for sharing this....GE |
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jinxed Member
since 2000-09-27
Posts 86 |
so softly beautiful...whew....just perfect |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Beautiful poem,just beautiful!!!!!!!!! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
{yes but shhhhhh don't tell anyone....  } |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Kidding....LOL...this was a lovely verse of a dream that I am sure alot of have at one time or another...great write my friend. |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I never remember my dreams but then again perhaps I haven't had any quite like this Rex |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kit...dreams can be treasures, each night a new adventure...thank you for sharing this beautiful one. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sweet Dreams baby...James |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Y E S !!! |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
~Bonnie: Thank you so much Bonnie … I appreciate you reading! Many thanks! ~Beth: And what a lovely dream for both, thanks so much Beth, I'm glad you enjoyed! ~LoneWolf: Nothing worse than realizing it's been a dream … quick … the Niquil! LOL, thanks LoneWolf! ~Sunshine: Thanks for the applause Karilea … I've never seen that one before, but I'll happily accept!  ~Amy: And I always love to read your poetry and responses Amy for the same reasons, thank you so much! ~RosePetals: Keeps you wondering and guessing sometimes doesn't it RosePetals? Thanks so much! ~GreenEyes: Lets order that second bottle of Niquil GreenEyes … thanks for reading and enjoying! ~Jinxed: Oh, thank you very much … I so appreciate it Jinxed, thank you! ~Vandana: Wow … thank you Vandana, I really appreciate it!!!!!! ~Mark: (OK … shhhhh … our little secret) ~Mark: OK, now I'm telling! LOL … thanks for the double response Mark, you know I appreciate your words so much! ~Rex: Oh Rex … that won't do! I'm going to have to drop you off a "dream-catcher" or something to help you … I wouldn't want you to miss out on such adventures! Thanks for reading Rex! ~Martie: Treasures and adventures indeed Martie … I love it when I can remember some vividly (even the scary ones) LOL, thanks Martie! ~James: Oh you charmer … sweet dreams to you too James, LOL ~Balladeer: ROFL! Well now, if you'd stop "whispering" I might actually hear ya next time!!! LOL With much appreciation to all, /Kit |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
hmmm how familiar this sounds, right i'm takking the batterys out of my alarm clock in future There are enough colours in the world, To paint your own dreams, You won't get them, Till you try. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Bravo on this one! Absolutely stunning! Liz |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Absolutely beautiful, Kit!! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kit~ To grant a wish is my pleasure after reading this delightful piece.  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
A stunning piece of work - and yes - last night in fact ~S~ ~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning. ~ Billy Wilder |
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seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
Beautiful! A joy to read. Would be more a joy to experience.....oh well! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Kit~ I love this and relate soooo well. I have dreams like this, then wonder if the person I was dreaming of had the same dream.... -SEA |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
~Maria: Thanks for reading Maria ... and that sounds like a great idea! ~Liz: Thank you so much for the Bravo me twin, much appreciated! ~Denise: I'm glad you enjoyed Denise ... thank you so much for the "beautiful"! ~Marge: Ah Marge ... you're responses always bring a smile to my face ... thank you!!! ~Wilfred: Aha! So you were the voice I was hearing then??? Thanks so much for the lovely comment Wilfred! ~Seraphin: A joy to experience indeed! Thanks so much for reading Seaphin! ~SEA: Sigh ... me too SEA, funny how it works that way isn't it? Thanks so much! Much appreciation to all, /Kit |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
kit- wow...this is wonderful. so beautiful. i love it. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
absolutely magnificent Kit, this is a great and awesome poem |
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Artistic Member
since 2000-08-09
Posts 107Colorado/Rochester, NY |
Kit- Ooooh... How I enjoyed the poem... it touched my heart in such a personal way! Simply LOVELY! ~Artistic~ "Dreams are the touchstones of our characters" -Henry David Thoreau |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
~Vicky: Thank you for the Wow and wonderfuls Vicky ... much appreciated! ~Rosebud: Thanks so much for reading Rosebud, I'm glad you enjoyed! ~Artistic: I'm happy I was able to touch your heart in such a nice way Artistic, thank you! Much appreciation to all, /Kit |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is so special to me. I cherish dreams and they remain in that place no one can call unreal, because they are so real. You said it so well. Kathleen |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Softly whispers, "Kit, Kit, Kit...." oops...sorry, my mind was running away from me for a moment Seriously...this is such a personal poem, like a glimpse of your dreams posted for the world to see. There's nothing I love mre than a poet who is not afraid to expose himself/herself through their writing. I've always said that any poem that comes from the heart can't be bad. Nice job with this one |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Great writing! Love dreams and the fantasies that go with them. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
~Kathleen: Reality and fantasy are such a muddled pair, its true ... thanks so much Kathleen! ~Ruth: Thank you so much Ruth ... you've ready very deeply in the lines here ... and very well. ~Insect: Oh ... so do I Insect ... so do I! Thanks so much! Much appreciation to you all, /Kit |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Kit, this was very beautiful and lovely. Reads with a true dream quality about it too. Parker |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
First, I loved this poem. It's beautiful. Second, I cracked up at Balladeer's response - no wonder you couldn't sleep with all that shouting! A |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Still having these strange dreams Kit? |
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