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Just One Wish
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poetic_imperfection Junior Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 45 |
GOD may I ask for just one wish, Just one be granted and true. I’m only asking to lay in your arms, Just this one wish Father will do. [This message has been edited by poetic_imperfection (edited 11-09-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
theres nothing imperfect about this.. you have penned a delicate, fragile, beautiful prayer.. very touching... welcome to passions new poet.. nice to have you here take care jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Welcome to Passions...this is written with beauty and grace...A wish for safety and comfort...may it be granted here on earth~ |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
A beautiful wish indeed. For those who wish such things, they will be granted. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions PoeticImperfection! What a lovely first post ... so much said in so few words, just beautiful ... hope to read more!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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poetic_imperfection Junior Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 45 |
Such a wonderful welcome. Thank you all!! I look forward to reading and posting more. There are sooooo many poems on here, how do I keep up on all that I want to reply to andd read? |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
so so beautiful welcome to passions what a lovely entrance Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
beautiful and graceful! this is a wonderful prayer and poem! welcome to Passions...glad you have joined us. as for the answer to your question...good luck, i've been around a while and i'm still trying to answer it LOL. Just read a little a day when you can...that's my secret...seems to work pretty good. Take care. ~amy~ "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
What a lovely poem! Welcome to the family! I look forward to reading more from you. In the meantime, please check your email for a special welcome.  |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Welcome to Passions-A very sweet wish and prayer, I hope your prayer will be answered. |
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poetic_imperfection Junior Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 45 |
Thank you ALL for that great welcome. One day my prayer will be answered, until then, I hope that I enjoy this family and get to know you all. PLY |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
You have to forget about "keeping up", it's bigger than all of us; you just have to use what time you have to read what you can,write when you can, reply when you can, and most of all...enjoy. Nice piece. Look forward to more from you. Welcome to Passions! jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 11-08-2000).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Welcome!! Sweet prayer! I hope you'll come and visit us in the Spiritual Forum! We'd love to read your work over there as well. Have a great time! Anything you need don't hesitate to give me an email. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Welcome to Passions..hope you enjoy as much as i do.. lovely poem~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
I'm sure the angels are singing a special song just for you, God must be saying well done my child, this is a very humble prayer. welcome to passions, look forward to more. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Warmest regards and Welcome to the family.....When it seems no one cares you will always find a friend inside these walls....believe me I speak from experience. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
It doesn't matter who around here you make a hit with... I know Dad heard that one. Sweet, sweet prayer my friend, and I'll see you there...... dale |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoeticImperfection~ Welcome to Passions - the friendliest, most talented gathering of poets on the Internet. Enjoyed your entrance poem. Read at your leisure and reply the same - you'll find some inspiring thoughts here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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poetic_imperfection Junior Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 45 |
I plan to do much reading here. I have to admit that I am very busy in this hectic world so please excuse my delay in writings and reply's. PLY |
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Kevin Dallas New Member
since 2000-11-10
Posts 2 |
So short, but am sure it will happen, or has already. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Poetic I~ Welcome This is very sweet, and touched my heart... -SEA |
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poetic_imperfection Junior Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 45 |
Kevin- I would like to think that it has happened already but one never knows. Thanks for your reply. Sea- Thank you for the kind welcome. A prayer can go a long way. THANKS ALL!! PLY |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Well done and welcome to Passions, I hope your wish comes true. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
You took the step by asking the right one to grant your wish. VERY SWEET POEM WELCOME |
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poetic_imperfection Junior Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 45 |
Daniel and Inot - Thank you both for your welcome and your readings. I look forward to yours. PLY |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS and may your wish be granted regards, sudhir |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
PI~ This is just so incredibly beautiful...well done Welcome to passions, I'm sure you will enjoy Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Welcome to Passions and may you continue to write such heartfelt appeals from your heart ...very nice!! |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
poetic_imperfection, A short, simple, beautiful poem that says so much with so little. Welcome to Passions ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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poetic_imperfection Junior Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 45 |
WOW What a family I have joined indeed.. Thank you all!!!! PLY |
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