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Emotion Breaks Through
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Emotion Breaks Through |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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I'm in control, no doubt about that I'm over you and that's a fact It just that at times when I think of you My tears will fall and emotion breaks through I'm not sorry, … not at all I'll watch gladly to see you fall When you're in pain, it's my pain too Then I think of you and emotion breaks through You left, you're gone, it makes me glad Do you think I am crying or so sad? It's just that when, I know what I knew The crying starts and emotion breaks through You say you're sorry, can we start again This time we'll be much more than friends I look in your eyes, … it's all I can do To stop tears of joy as emotion breaks through Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Kethry: and so the circle continues....I liked your words here, it seems that love does go round in circles...and emotion does break through  Well written. Roniece |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks Roniece, A compliment indeed coming from you. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
"It's just that when I know what I knew the crying starts and the emotions breaks through" Kethry, ya know this one tuggs at this reader's heart... The emotion and feeling in this poem is soooooo intense... Thank you for the read PoetFriend Coco |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ Yes, those memories go round - round - round. Sometimes they leave us dizzy with remembering. I like this trail of emotion. Quite well said, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Coco, Thanks, soft smiles. Marge, Dizzy that's me and blonde to boot. Thanks for responding. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
You wrote it so well; my emotions broke through too Very, very well done!!!!Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks Pepper, for the reading and the faithfulness in responding. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
That circle is never unbroken, and may it always lead you around to a smile, I enjoyed this. It truly speaks of the emotions we've all been through. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Ron, thanks for responding, glad you could see the circular nature of the poem. Be well Kethry < !signature--> Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford [This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 11-11-2000).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Kethry this is a wonderful circle of emotion very well written...have a nice day..ethome |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Enjoyed Kethry ..and heartfelt..nicely written.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is very emotional and heartfelt, Kethry...wonderful poem! Nathan |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
ethome, thanks I'm writing ring poetry at the moment, you know wedding ring, suffering Victoria, thanks for the stop by and the comment. Nate, thank you so much. be well Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Kethry, this brings to mind a country song, I can't remember the title, but she speaks of how she is over him and never thinks about him, except..Monday which was never good anyway, and on to all the days of the week. No idea why I had to tell you that Loved the poem. Sandra |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Kethry* this is excellent...you've penned the heart of a love that goes on...and now that I've read the other replies I'm of course humming the tune that Sandra mentioned...LOL...and of course I can't remember the title either! |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
I agree with Mardge.....Memories go round and round and round and round and round..............great write. Jenn E |
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