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Kethry
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Victoria Australia

0 posted 2000-11-11 12:22 PM


I'm in control, no doubt about that
I'm over you and that's a fact
It just that at times when I think of you
My tears will fall and emotion breaks through

I'm not sorry, … not at all
I'll watch gladly to see you fall
When you're in pain, it's my pain too
Then I think of you and emotion breaks through

You left, you're gone, it makes me glad
Do you think I am crying or so sad?
It's just that when, I know what I knew
The crying starts and emotion breaks through

You say you're sorry, can we start again
This time we'll be much more than friends
I look in your eyes, … it's all I can do
To stop tears of joy as emotion breaks through




Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2000-11-11 12:40 PM


Kethry:  and so the circle continues....I liked your words here, it seems that love does go round in circles...and emotion does break through    Well written.   Roniece
Kethry
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2 posted 2000-11-11 12:44 PM


Thanks Roniece,
A compliment indeed coming from you.
Be well
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

CocoBaci
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3 posted 2000-11-11 12:54 PM


"It's just that when I know what I knew the crying starts and the emotions breaks through"

Kethry, ya know this one tuggs at this reader's heart...
The emotion and feeling in this poem is soooooo intense...
Thank you for the read PoetFriend
Coco


Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2000-11-11 12:57 PM


Kethry~
Yes, those memories go round - round - round.
Sometimes they leave us dizzy with remembering.
I like this trail of emotion.
Quite well said, my friend.
~*Marge*~



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Kethry
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5 posted 2000-11-11 01:33 AM


Coco, Thanks, soft smiles.
Marge, Dizzy that's me and blonde to boot. Thanks for responding.
Be well
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

peppermint35
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6 posted 2000-11-11 01:37 AM


You wrote it so well; my emotions broke through too   Very, very well done!!!!

Pepper
"I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place"
Ram Dass


Kethry
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Victoria Australia
7 posted 2000-11-11 01:39 AM


Thanks Pepper,
for the reading and the faithfulness in responding.
Be well
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

Ron K. Fox
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8 posted 2000-11-11 07:25 PM


That circle is never unbroken, and may it always lead you around to a smile, I enjoyed this. It truly speaks of the emotions we've all been through. Ron

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox



Kethry
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Victoria Australia
9 posted 2000-11-11 08:50 PM


Ron,
thanks for responding, glad you could see the circular nature of the poem.

Be well
Kethry
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Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
Rex E. Alford


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ethome
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10 posted 2000-11-12 10:37 PM


Kethry this is a wonderful circle of emotion very well written...have a nice day..ethome
Victoria
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11 posted 2000-11-12 11:03 PM


Enjoyed Kethry ..and heartfelt..nicely written..


                  ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Nate Dogg
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12 posted 2000-11-13 01:43 PM


This is very emotional and heartfelt, Kethry...wonderful poem!

Nathan

Kethry
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Victoria Australia
13 posted 2000-11-13 02:58 PM


ethome, thanks I'm writing ring poetry at the moment, you know wedding ring, suffering  

Victoria, thanks for the stop by and the comment.

Nate, thank you so much.
be well
Kethry


Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
Rex E. Alford

catalinamoon
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14 posted 2000-11-13 09:54 PM


Kethry, this brings to mind a country song, I can't remember the title, but she speaks of how she is over him and never thinks about him, except..Monday which was never good anyway, and on to all the days of the week. No idea why I had to tell you that  
Loved the poem.
Sandra

Butterflies_dont_cry
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15 posted 2000-11-13 10:05 PM


Kethry* this is excellent...you've penned the heart of a love that goes on...and now that I've read the other replies I'm of course humming the tune that Sandra mentioned...LOL...and of course I can't remember the title either!
Jenn E
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16 posted 2000-11-13 10:07 PM


I agree with Mardge.....Memories go round and round and round and round and round..............great write.
Jenn E

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