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The Need Of Forgivness...................
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The Need Of Forgivness................... |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Oh Sweet love that commands my soul hear my heart voice the need for forgivness for tear drenched verses written in pain deaf to consequence, I feel lifeless. My depths of understanding grows deeper with each breath feeling your souls torment your hearts struggles and regrets. Lonliness of my distance longing of physical touch I am aware of human nature for I have felt as such Feeling and doing are diffrent that's what peirces my heart but I am working on forgiving giving our memories a new start All of your other reasons I see an understand "2" that you love more then life I respect you for "both" of them All I know is the love that I feel and how it will live within I will remeber "us" and "beggining" and not what we were in the end I hope on day your cold is replaced with the warmth of my arms around you and if that day never comes "May you find hapiness in all you do" I Love You, All of Me.......and a little more..... Jenn E [This message has been edited by Jenn E (edited 11-10-2000).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
"the need for forgiveness, for tear drenched verses written in pain, deaf to consequence. I feel lifeless" Great words well penned......intense way to start a poem...catches the attention and leads into the verses of heartache and pain suffered by human mistakes....lovely words of internal lasting love never to be totally buried away from reality.....enjoyed this very much!! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I believe in forgiveness..and you penned it very well. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
All I know is the love that I feel and how it will live within ****I will remeber "us" and "beggining" and not what we were in the end**** I hope on day your cold is replaced with the warmth of my arms around you ****and if that day never comes "May you find hapiness in all you do"**** ======================== to love and let go with out regret and bitterness is one of the hearts hardest learned lessons ... but once a heart can truly love this unselfishly... it heals in its own light ... you have penned a beautiful heartfelt poem Jenn.. and you already know it touches me. take care JM |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
JennE* Your poetry is so moving...My heart would have to be made of stone not to feel the emotions in this...My best to you dear poet and please know that there are always those who will listen and be there for you to lean on...and your poetry is the light of healing...walk toward it~ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JennE~ This is tender and heartfelt. Forgiveness is something we give - and hopefully something we get. Sometimes it's slow in coming to us - but we bask in joy when it does. And sometimes we're reticent to give it - but once we do ... the release is tantamount to a rebirthing of the soul. This is a wonderful reminder of the gift of forgiveness. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
forgiving is so hard after we've been hurt. You have a heart of gold to be able to do this. Not many can. i commend you for this. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Jenn...your pain is so evident in this...I hope the forgiveness you seek is there for you |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Etome* Thank you for your compliments...I take them in the highest reagards.....I am glad you enjoyed.... Pdv* Yes, I believe in forgivness also...Thank you for reading...... Janet* Thank you my friend.....Lifeis not easy but does have to be lived doesn't it...... Holly* I am just so touched that anything I write moves you...or anyone for that matter....I hope it moves him also.......if not it has been a healing power to me that's forsure. Thank you. Mardge* Thanks for stopping in......your words are so true...and we all need to be reminded to forgive......Thnak you Ron* Thank you...I must say this is one of the hardest things I have ever been through....but it is life experiences that make us who we are I suppose. Paula* Not only do I seek it from him but I am needing to give it to him also.......one day ata time..baby steps.......Thank you for reading. Jenn E |
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