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Two Hearts |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I lay in the darkness last night and I listened to you breathe, I felt a steady beating heart of the man in which I believe. I laid there in the silence closing my eyes I could see, the love there in your eyes the certain way you look at me. Before drifting off to dream I gently gave a kiss or two I softly whispered in your ear good night dear, I love you. And somewhere in the darkness the silence heard us breathe, and two hearts beat as one for in this love they do believe. ~D~ 11-09-2000 On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
It seems that love and slumber are filling the walls of Passions tonight...beautiful peaceful thoughts~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
BDC, last night the thoughts were so peaceful. Thanks for peeking in. *s* |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
one of the mny reasons i love reading your poetry - is that we often have identical thought - as with this one - you expressed our thoughts beautifully |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
beautiful! very romantic! hugs, dg "i could hide out under there...i just made you say 'underwear'...i could leave but i'll just stay--all my stuff's here anyway..." |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentleSpirit~ This is such a lovely pairing of hearts. What gentle, loving thoughts. Enjoyed it very much. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
A feeling of love and peace...which I enjoyed very much  Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Lovely calming read...very well done!! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'And somewhere in the darkness the silence heard us breathe, and two hearts beat as one for in this love they do believe.' I echo what ethome said. Very calming read. Absolutely beautiful! Love it! sp  I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Picture perfect D. . . Wonderful. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is very good...James |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Bill, thank you, and you know how much I have always enjoyed yours too. Hugs. dg, thanks for stopping by and leaving your thoughts. Marge your comments always are welcome. Thank you. peppermint, I am glad to have shared the feelings with you. Thanks. ethome, I am glad you found my words calming. Thanks. Snowpants, thank you for such a considerate response, glad you enjoyed. Sven, ahhh thanks so much.  James, thank you, I appreciate it very much. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Gentle Spirit, What a well written poem of love. The sleep must have been so deep. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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