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Some other place
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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If I could always have my way Then at your side I’d be But as the bluest skies turn gray You’ve gone away from me And though you cannot hold me tight And I can’t kiss your lips Just close your eyes and I’ll be right Beyond your finger tips So pull the covers close around you For that is my embrace And know I thank God that I found you If in some other place |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great rhythum and flow in this one Kevin you make the words mean so much and they are cleverly arranged...ethome |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely Kevin..and i agree with ethome ..beautiful form.  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Kevin-- beautiful work as always! loved the flow to this and the format was wonderful. your poems always inspire me. great write. im greedy...more please  Take care.~amy~ |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Heya, Kev- Some Other Place was getting buried in some other place that I'm sure no one would find it without digging. And since I was digging, I figured I should pull this treasure out and put it back on display. Wonderful job with the whole thingamajigger! I feel like that too much. |
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