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Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

0 posted 2000-11-09 02:21 PM




Dear diary,                         Friday 13, 1967

I'm really posessed,
by demonic spirits,
I deeply confess
because last night,
I went to the hospital and got an x-ray
and to my fright,
there was the image of a spirit in my body!
I bet now, somebody will believe me!!
I laughed as screams of shock,
escaped from my doctor's mouth,
then I got up and ran, then everything blacked out
and I didn't remember anything,
that happened after that,
but when I woke-up in the morning,
my memory suddenly came back.
My wife came in my room and told me,
to turn on my T.V.
because on the news,
they were talking about an act of insanity.
They showed my hospital
and they showed all those bloody bodies.
Each body was headless or sliced in half
as a total of 100 people were killed,
in the aftermath.
Hmmm, now who in the world, could have done that?

© Copyright 2000 Nate Dogg - All Rights Reserved
Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
1 posted 2000-11-09 02:55 PM


AH Nathan...this still isnt the end of this story...finish it
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2000-11-09 03:51 PM


Makes me think about the spirits that dwell within people.  Why do we have mass murderers...does some form of evil dwell within them...what name should we place upon the evil....is it insanity, is it demonic spirits, is it a medical condition, or a combination of all of these..James
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
3 posted 2000-11-09 03:54 PM


Nate,
shades of a psychopath! Where is this going?
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

Nate Dogg
Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
4 posted 2000-11-13 01:34 PM


Thank you Paula..this is the ending unfortunately....Thanks Jiommy for your wonderful post...and thank you too Kethry!

Nathan

Nate Dogg
Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
5 posted 2000-11-13 02:45 PM


Once again, I would like to thank everyone for responding to my poem cause I really didn't think anyone would respond or post on it....because the positive comments from the readers, I've decided to extend the series...I can't tell you when it will be out but I'll be working on it as soon as I can. Bye!

Nathan

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