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Sven
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0 posted 2000-11-10 02:22 PM


Angel of Darkness
we thank thee
for this night

shelter us now
from this pain
with your wings

wings of night
hiding the heart
healing the soul

speak the words
let us hear
share our hurt

open our eyes
guide our steps
give us life

for this night
we thank thee
Angel of Darkness

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-11-10 02:33 PM


This will be so appreciated...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 2000-11-10 02:50 PM


How Beautiful!
Almost like a prayer
What a lovely tribute to a lovely poetess
Liz

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3 posted 2000-11-10 02:52 PM


Sven, you sir can write with such beauty. How you can see in ones soul then write about them is a wonder.
Martie
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4 posted 2000-11-10 06:27 PM


Dark Angel is very special..as is this poem.
Poet deVine
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5 posted 2000-11-10 07:19 PM


She's a wonderful friend...you've captured her essense beautifully.  
Aimster
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6 posted 2000-11-10 07:29 PM


Sven...

one of my fav writers writing about another
one of my favorites...how cool is that!
this is beautiful...you have a true gift
friend of mine. i love this whole gallery
you are doing...you have an amazing heart
and i am proud to be a part of this
extrordinary project you are creating.

take care.
~amy~

Dark Angel
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7 posted 2000-11-10 07:53 PM


Hey Sven I thank you so very much for your lovely tribute  
I don't know what to say, it is beautiful  
Line eight has captured this little Dark Angel to a Tee. Well Done  

Maree

"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this won't be enough"
"Maree Russo"

wayoutwalt
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8 posted 2000-11-10 08:05 PM


sven you are doing a great job with these.

dark angel i lift a toast
she is to me the most
she's always lent an ear
even when im drunk on beer
now let's do a Dark angel roast!

take dark angel...PLEASE
i flew in from miami on boy are my dark angel wings tired
how many dark angel's does it take to write a great poem...aww just one cuz she does it so well yuh yuh

winks at DA great online friend o mine

thanks, sven, for writing this...

Kethry
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9 posted 2000-11-11 12:17 PM


Sir Sven,
a picture perfect angel of night
you did it again, and got it so right
penned by an angel of purest light
how can you do this, in every write
you gave Dark Angel wings for her to take flight
protecting us all from the darkest of night.

Be well
Kethry



Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

Sven
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10 posted 2000-11-11 11:47 PM


Thank you to all who replied. . . I'm glad that you're enjoying this series. . .  

Maree, my friend, I am honored that you liked this. . . you've been my friend for a while now. . .and I'm glad that I was able to cast you here in word for all to see. . . thank you. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


tracie66
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11 posted 2000-11-12 06:00 AM


Oh dear Sven, beautiful words for one of passions most beautiful hearts....most fitting piece my friend  
Love Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



serenity blaze
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12 posted 2000-11-12 06:25 AM


Thank you, Sven, for writing this for me sista...this is a lovely lady...and hugs to both of you for all of the joy of your friendship...HUGS
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