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Favorite Lines (vandana's challenge. Part 1. serious walt)
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Favorite Lines (vandana's challenge. Part 1. serious walt) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Never to see the light of day Never wishing to be proud Where can I see in sweet laid words? What I see in every cloud Is there one that was born to you That made you wholly believe Words weren’t born long time ago You, yourself can conceive Her beauty described in mere words A sweeter song than morning birds Who ever hope and ever try To please her as she passes by When all you’ve seen and done Fall a smile upon your face Don’t ever think you’re finished You’ve laid touch upon this place When nothing but a moonbeam Is playing in your eyes It’s a feature presentation When there is but a chance To hold you in my arms love I take it without hesitation What makes it last so long When seemed not meant to be Hands holding us in love Inside I saw where sorrow slept So many tears that she had wept Into the cold and salty sea Never again to be for me My love, Words. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Very good,my friend!!!!!!!way to go.  KEEP IT UP |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanx vandana your idea rocks |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ I didn't see the challenge - but if this is the result - I'm impressed ! 'When nothing but a moonbeam Is playing in your eyes It’s a feature presentation' And it's a PERFECT night for that feature presentation ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I echo Vandana, Way-to-go Walty "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanx da and marge big smiles yuh twas a blast |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i think you deserve a rose for those beautiful verses walt.  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I love this Walt! It's great. . . can't wait for the "Fun Walt"!. . . Thanks to vandana for the challenge. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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