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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2000-11-10 01:51 PM


Never to see the light of day
Never wishing to be proud
Where can I see in sweet laid words?
What I see in every cloud

Is there one that was born to you
That made you wholly believe
Words weren’t born long time ago
You, yourself can conceive

Her beauty described in mere words
A sweeter song than morning birds
Who ever hope and ever try
To please her as she passes by

When all you’ve seen and done
Fall a smile upon your face
Don’t ever think you’re finished
You’ve laid touch upon this place

When nothing but a moonbeam
Is playing in your eyes
It’s a feature presentation

When there is but a chance
To hold you in my arms love
I take it without hesitation

What makes it last so long
When seemed not meant to be
Hands holding us in love

Inside I saw where sorrow slept
So many tears that she had wept
Into the cold and salty sea
Never again to be for me

My love,
Words.



© Copyright 2000 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
vandana
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1 posted 2000-11-10 02:12 PM


Very good,my friend!!!!!!!way to go. KEEP IT UP
wayoutwalt
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2 posted 2000-11-10 07:59 PM


thanx vandana your idea rocks
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3 posted 2000-11-10 08:26 PM


Walt~
I didn't see the challenge -
but if this is the result -
I'm impressed !

'When nothing but a moonbeam
Is playing in your eyes
It’s a feature presentation'


And it's a PERFECT night for that feature presentation !
~*Marge*~


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4 posted 2000-11-10 08:55 PM


I echo Vandana, Way-to-go Walty  

"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this won't be enough"
"Maree Russo"

wayoutwalt
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5 posted 2000-11-10 11:56 PM


thanx da and marge big smiles yuh twas a blast
Victoria
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6 posted 2000-11-11 12:14 PM


i think you deserve a rose for those beautiful verses walt.

                ~Victoria~

                  


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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7 posted 2000-11-12 04:18 PM


I love this Walt!

It's great. . . can't wait for the "Fun Walt"!. . .

Thanks to vandana for the challenge. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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