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In Passion's Care
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In Passion's Care |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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In Passion's Care Sounds of silence broken by The reign of heaven's need. Tears tap- tap, awakening The restful soul to feed Upon the words in passion's care, Those sent to me in dreams. To blanket me in warmth of you, Till next the sunshine beams. A kiss that travels, miles to me To gently brush a cheek, A smile or softened laugh I feel To brighten a morning, bleek. Reflecting thoughts of you, each morn, Mind fill and pierce my soul. Each meeting of a dream-loved sleep Till you, my eyes behold. Awaiting touch of rainbow's hues As morning sun, does rise To greet your song of color's bright, A canvas in blue skies. As breezes blow and share their kiss They carry, whispers heard, To tender touch the heart of me, Till next I feel "love's" word. Maureen 9*26*2k [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 09-26-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
And breezes blow and share their kiss May the world share many kisses with you bright one. Maureen your depth never ceases to amaze me. Be well Kethry "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I enjoyed the flow on this one, Maureen. Kathleen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Kethry hmmmmm one thing I never thought I had is depth...just a lot of heart though...to fill ~~soft thanks Maureen |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Maureen, this is beautiful as always, and deep as an ocean. Written with your heart and soul. Take care Marsha |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Maureen - have you found that writing becomes easier and easier as you do more of it? Your writing sure seems to reflect that theory. This is a beautiful poem for its flow and its thoughts. Sweetly done. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Marsha thank You..I can see you on aol im..if you ever wish to say hello just send one..it's [email protected] ~~smiles M |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Lovely verses from a lovely poet Very beautiful flowing lines Liz |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
LngJhnAg...I have only been writing 2 years ..I have only been on the computer that long..and out of sadness (illness and death of my father and obviously the pending loss of my marriage, although I never expected this)...so when I discovered I could make my thoughts into poems rather then e-mails to myself...everything changed...and my poetry became my diary of life. Some days the flow comes easy like today's In Passion's Care (if inspired) and other times I revert back and post one of my older ones here and to tell you the truth ..some of my first ones have more depth...just depends on my mood and my life and believe me I am a cancer, a child of the moon and I phase in and out...I guess one could say with practice one improves...I am lucky though my flow and rhyme come naturally so all I ever work on is the content...or message of feelings ~~soft thanks...wish I could explain it better but I don't understand it myself and am taking advantage of the creativeness before my "blue period" disappears and I lose the skill. Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Liz  sometimes your responses make me go back and reread my own poems as I never remember what I write after doing so...isn't that strange...it takes several readings before it stays in my mind....today I was feelingsome warmth of memories as the rain continued to dampen another day ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Kathleen My thoughts flowed with the continuing fall rains today...thank you  Maureen |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
MoonChild, a beautiful write by you I read this eve... Thank you Coco |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Maureen~ And I want to jump in here and say, not only is this lovely ... but I've missed you ! Hope you are well and in God's love. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
a most lovely poem - I too miss you |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey! this is really beautiful (like all of yours) and I really missed you terribly.... ethome |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Maureen, This was simply beautiful, I enjoyed it very much and I too have missed you and if you need someone to talk to I am here for you. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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