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Lost In Loves Music
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Lost In Loves Music |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Lost in the music that came with your kiss Lost in the music to dance just like this The melody sings of this new love we share A sweetly sung refrain, playing softly on the air Lost in the cadence your hand touching mine Lost in the rhythm our bodies entwined A harmony of touch, taste, sound and sight Two voices sing sweetly all through loves night Lost in the music your heartbeat so strong Lost in our music to sing all life long a kiss blown softly |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
OH yes!! This is so very beautiful, my twin.....and written from a happy heart!! It put a smile on this musician's face!!  Follow your dream! |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Very nice Paula, Has a lovely flow to go along with a lovely image. Rich |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Lost in the music that came with your kiss absolutely love this opening line!!!  Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Paula~ you know, this put such a smile on my face.....what a bright sweet poem! Just loved it.  -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paula, this is beautiful, so lovely, and so happy. I really love this one, it's absolutely wonderful. Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
I love the lyrical flowing of this, it reads like a song. Thank you Olias |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh Paula, you got my heart smiling today reading such pretty rhyme you penned!Coco |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Ohhhh and what a delicate and tender song to be lost in...being love is very becoming on you Paula! This is beautiful~ |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Paula, My dear friend, I am so glad to see smiles. This is so very powerful, I loved every line. "Lost in the music your heartbeat so strong Lost in our music to sing all life long" Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful structured lines Paula they are so tight in rhythum and rhyme and flow so easily .....excellent write!! Lost In Love's Music love the title.....from all the songs I've written I can tell you love and music certainly are entwined both coming from the seat of emotion...write on girl!! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Paula-- this is very beautiful and touches the heart. i felt as though i was floating on a could while reading this...very peaceful and gentle. beautiful! take care. ~amy~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ah, Paula, you sound happy and in love. This is a good thing. And a beautiful poem to go with it. Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Such a light, lilting tune. I could get lost in it too ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
This is beautiful Paula I guess this is a time when you want to be lost. Lost under the covers! Ha! Like I said this is beautiful |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
paula sweet sweet poem gave me a smile |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sunny girl...I found myself...and the place my heart should be Rich...thank you...glad it made nice images for you A Whispers Caress...thank you Sea...glad I could do that sweet lady...thank you Marsha...I'm glad you like this...thank you Olias...it is just the music of my heart Coco...thank you sweetie Holly...thanks so much Daniel...my heart is where it wants to be...thank you Ethome...would love for you to put it to music my friend Aimster...glad I could make you float...thank you Sandra...yes happy...thank you Marge...lets just get lost together...thank you Insect...LOL you are such a sweet tease...lost under the covers hehehe...come with me then...thank you Walt...thank you I'm glad you found it sweet |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Paula, I got lost in the rhythm and flow of this one. Be well Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very gentle Paula...after reading it I thought the title was "A kiss blown softly" has a nice essence to it...James |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Kethry...Im glad you like it thanks James...you would pick up on the kiss sweet man...LOL...thank you |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Your lover's rhythm was carried throughout your poem. Excellent rhyme and meter setting off a very loving sentiments Liz |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Liz...thanks for the sweet words |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Just had to read this one again I really love it so much...have a nice day ...ethome |
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