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Take me in your arms...
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Take me in your arms... |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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take me in your arms and lead me then on to that sacred place let me visit that inner space, so deep, deep inside your heart lead me through, my love, lead me through -- take me there... have been waiting so long for this special feeling seemed like eternity but love is worth the wait is like living in hope for a celestial delight of a thousand stars falling through the weaves of night's starry blanket showering meteorites through the hole in the sky take me in your arms lead me through, my love please take me there and lead me through your space dark yesterdays now seem to have blown across me like hollering wintry winds they have been now eclipsed by crystalline brilliance of your butterfly heart as pure as a new-born and as fresh as spring's air take me in your arms lead me through... ..... Hey dear friends, I am back here for a few spare moments, I thought I should share this with you... Thanks for all the kind support that I receive here... Regards, Sudhir |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is lovely Sudhir! It's so good to catch a glimpse of your work, even if briefly. Wonderful imagery in the beautiful piece, excellent!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sudhir you certainly have'nt lost your touch this is exceptional writing!! "hollering wintry winds......by crystalline brillance..........your butterfly heart.... as fresh as spring's air" you are a poet and there's no way you're ever going to change because you can't you're just going to get better..................ethome |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sudhir lyer~ this is beautiful.......I hope you get more time to post.....I miss reading your wonderful words. -SEA |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Sudhir, good morning. This is such an imaginative piece of writing. Your love is written beautifully here. "seemed like eternity but love is worth the wait is like living in hope for a celestial delight of a thousand stars falling through the weaves of night's starry blanket" ~~ I especially enjoyed this Rainydays |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Sudhir-- it is so wonderful to see your beautiful work once again. this is just lovely! such beautiful images and feelings you inspire. hope to see more work from you soon. take care m'friend. ~amy~ |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Sudhir~ This takes my breath away! love is worth the wait~ a celestial delight of a thousand stars falling through the weaves of night's starry blanket Now that my friend, is what I call truly falling in love... sigh Deb |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sudhir--No, you haven't lost your touch, but it does sound like you've lost your heart...this poem is a treasure! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sudhir, you have penned a beauty here... "Dark yesterdays now seem to blow across me Like hollering wintery winds They have now been eclipsed By crystalline brilliance" Oh my, how you captivate a reader in some of these verses... Coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 11-08-2000).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Don't think for a minute we've forgotten you, Sudhir!! So good to see this one, it's very romantic and honest. Take care and please come back and post and visit soon!! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you all so very much, my friends.... I am sorry that I am unable to find even that bit of time to reply to each of you individually.... I will come back to that soon, I promise... See you all real soon, Regards, Sudhir |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Friends, Here I am as promised... Kit, you have been such a supportive friend always... thanks for all your kind words... ethome, I am humbled by your words of praise... Thanks SEA, I fight with the hands of time to grab whatever moments I can, to be here... Thanks for your 'wonderful' response... Rainydays, I never had the chance to WELCOME you to passions... Thanks for reading and picking out what you liked... Amy, your response makes me feel so good... thanks Deb, Thanks so very much... falling in love, indeed!!! Martie, Thanks so very much, seems like I have lost my heart... and the feeling is incredible... Coco, thanks a million for your most wonderful response... Kathleen, Here I am again today... visiting my home... Thanks so much for being there ... Regards to all, Sudhir |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Very beautiful, Sudhir. It's great to read your poetry again Liz |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sudhir~ My friend, my friend - how wonderful to see you and to have the chance to read this lovely offering from you. May you know that you are missed and here's hoping you can come see us more often. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Suddy...how is the busy life? Your poem sparkles with the truth of a contented and releasing love... sigh good write my friend. K The wind shifts like this: Like a human without illusions... This is how the wind shifts: Like a human, heavy and heavy, Who does not care. W.S |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Ah, Liz, my friend, thank you so much... Marge, it is a most wonderful happening in my day if I am here... amongst all of you... Thanks so much... O Kamla, Life is indeed busy, but here I am fighting work and accepting longer days at work... Thanks so much My regards, Sudhir |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
beautiful..lots of happiness and love ..what more can one ask for.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thank you so much, Victoria... Regards, Sudhir |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Sudhir, not only are you back but back with a vengance! So many new poems for me to read. I have missed reading new and beautiful poems from you. Nice to see you here again. Dee I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
...and Dee, thank you so much for being the enthusiastic reader... and a friend... It feels so good to be back... regards, sudhir |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Sudhir...happiness....James |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Thanks a lot James, my friend... regards, sudhir |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
 sigh I find my romantic heart very satisfied after reading your work I eagerly await more!!!Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
pepper~ Thank you so very much... regards, sudhir |
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