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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Everytime, Iam alone, And I feel the need, Want someone to love me, Everytime, I feel the need, I feel love, The love that last forever, Everytime, you come to me, I feel so need, you take me In your arms, I was caught in a minute, I felt that the you needed me , As I needed you, You wouldn't let me go, Everytime, you looked into my eyes, you softly whispered the words, That I was longing to hear, Everytime, you tired to say the right words, But didn't come out from your heart, I cried and wondered when you will say I love you, Everytime, I want you say the words, you couldn't say the right words, Everytime.... Do you listen what my heart wants?, I only wanted you, But my sorrow and pain grew stronger than before, Everytime, You come to me, I feel the need, [This message has been edited by vandana (edited 11-10-2000).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
...vandana... even in love, there is so much need, on both parts. But, maybe that is what keeps love alive and strong....caring and daring to fulfill your partner's needs. Wonderful write, and it made me think, also!!  Follow your dream! |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Sometimes it is hard to express in words what one feels. But you did an excellent job in this piece. -------------- You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face and show the world all the love in your heart Then people are gonna treat you better You're gonna find, yes you will That your beautiful as you feel.~~~ Carol King |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
everytime you write a poem I feel a need to read it. . . and this is no exception. . . we should feel this way all the time. . . -------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Sunnt1,Kitkat,Sven,thank you all!!!!!!!!  |
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