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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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lunchtime lovelies the best of times alone with thought to see which way the pen shall wrought all around the people loom and alone am I in this hurried room ‘tis better so I hear the voice it says “all right, you have the choice to speak your mind or let thoughts dwell regardless, it’s done ~ ‘twill be truth to tell” and all around the aromas waft a hunger of mind leaves my body safe no food just now can fill the void on wings of lift I’ll be buoyed… there is no way to sit and tell these my thoughts their way to dwell whether they languish or pick up steam these thoughts alone will lead to dreams Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I really liked this:' the best of times alone with thought' ahhhhhhhh time alone is very hard for me to get....  -SEA |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
All alone with your thoughts even while in the midst of the lunchtime crowd....typical poet mind I'd say and it will never change because that's where the beautiful difference in people becomes so marvelous. You might recite a poem to the guy reading the stock market journal at the same lunch table and he might grasp it but probably not appreciate it (not in all cases) the same way. So you do what you love to do from the heart and you're right, those thoughts quite often turn into dreams, for a poet.....loved this one Sunshine ............ethome |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, You are really wonderful, sis!!! How can you write such fantastic thoughts with lunch aromas floating all around, in an office that I can only guess is really busy? My hat is off to you......you do have power of concentration!!  Follow your dream! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I know this feeling well, Sunshine...but sometimes my thoughts are a crowd of me...and they won't shut-up. Great poem! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ I know just how you feel ... Such appeteasers of delight fill my mind at the appointed hour. It is quite a treat to know that others share the same poetic aromas. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh my......I can relate on this onetoo... ...you describe it quite good.wonderful thoughts.... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I enjoyed this very much, and can identify with the mood. |
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The Poetic Plumber Junior Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 38 |
Sunshine, That was really a great poem. You have such a way with words. Really looking forward to more. I sometimes write on my way to work, myself. Thanks again for the welcoming card. Roger |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Sunshine, Wonderful write, enjoyed it so much, well done. " these thoughts alone will lead to dreams" Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and people wonder how I can write at work. . .  wonderful. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
SEA, I hope you manage to take each moment as they come then...we all need that bit of alone time... ethome, your comments hit home...it is indeed what makes each one of us so uniquely individual and special... Sunny...thank you... Martie, I'll have my crowd call your crowd and we'll do lunch... Marge...appeteasers....PERFECT... Thank you Charisma... Temptress, thank you... Roger, you are welcome, and thank you for your kind words... Daniel, I like that line, too...thank you... Sven, get out from under your desk.... thank you all... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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