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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-11-10 11:39 AM




meteoric fall

stagnant seeming
sky lights
building pressure
inside
waiting for the
day
when all shall open
wide
and I will then make
the one big
fall
and go out in
brilliant
and take it
all




Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Robert Joseph
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1 posted 2000-11-10 11:42 AM



Sunshine, A luminary explosion...love the way you closed the piece.

Robert Joseph

Marsha
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2 posted 2000-11-10 12:05 PM


Kari, this is superb, not one wasted letter and so wonderful. Simply beautiful, utterly brilliant. I love this, I really do.
Take care
               Majestic Mushy
                      M
                        


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

wayoutwalt
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3 posted 2000-11-10 12:06 PM


smash and grab smash and grab is what i say yuh
!

Sven
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4 posted 2000-11-10 01:11 PM


Take it all!!

Falling here my friend. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Sunshine
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5 posted 2000-11-10 02:23 PM


RJ, had I more time to learn graphics there was a glorious picture that would have made it even better.  Thank you for your kind comment...

Marsha, waste not, want not...

WOW...nope, wrong message, read again...

Sven...nope, wrong message, read again...

thanks, everyone!


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



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