Open Poetry #10 |
Tribute to Clair de Lune [repost, for Majestic Marsha....because she loves music...] |
Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tribute to Clair de Lune Softly, tenderly, swaying in the midnight’s soft breezes, comes to me the haunting melody and gently eases my soul into a symphony of flowing rhapsody as the moonlight’s sonata sings only to me. Embracing me, holding me tenderly, stroking every sense I lie without moving, the haunting melody grows intense and enters every fibre of my very being giving me a foresight which will go from you unseeing. Refrains are hungry for understanding the note’s touch, nay, I do not miss you so very much when music’s enrapture traps my very core, but with the passing of the melody, I will then miss you even more. 13 January, 2000 < !signature--> Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-10-2000).] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
"when music’s enrapture traps my very core, but with the passing of the melody, I will then miss you even more." ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you've sung my soul, girl!! one of my absolute FAVORITE pieces of music... and this could be a tribute.... i wish i wrote this for someone very special and maybe he'll read this and know..... thank you!!! wonderfully penned |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
It is also my favorite piece of classical music..Enjoyed very much Sunshine.. lovely ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, Oh my, this is so beautiful, so breathtakingly wonderful. Thank you thank you thank you very very much. This one of my favourite pieces of music. One of the few presents my daddy gave me before he died, was a music box. Which played Clair de lune, and I loved it. But he died when I was 5 and although I managed to hang on to it until I was 20 it got broken and I've missed it ever since. Now when I hear it I remember, although very mistily, but still remember him. Beautiful poem love thank you truly wonderful present. Take care love Majestic Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Sunshine ~~~ Oh...what a beautiful piece of work this is to go with my very favorite musical work! This is one piece that I love dearly, both your poetry and Clair de Lune. They are both filled with such beauty and feeling. I am once again in awe of your talent, my friend!! Follow your dream! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I can hear it now Sunshine. . . Van Cliburn. . . or perhaps. . . Rubenstein. . . or. . . ah yes, the master himself. . . Debussy. . . This is delicate, just like the music that inspired it. . . ----------------------------------------------------< !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 11-10-2000).] |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Hey, I remember this... You opened my eyes, and ears, with this one the first time... Lovely poem, Sunshine, Michael |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
You compliment beautiful music, with beautiful words. I enjoyed the harmony Regards Olias |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I'm glad you reposted it - Tis one of my most fav classical pieces too -even though I can play only the 1st page and 1/2 well Now I think I'll try and write a tribute poem to another fav - something by Rachmaninoff ~G~ |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
doreen, if you would accept this gift, then this is yours to use as you will...thank you for the AAARRRGGGHHH.... Victoria, thank you... Marsha, you are so very welcome... Sunny, with both hands attached to long arms, I hug you... Sven, a tremendous thanks... Michael, I remember that! So glad you came back for the encore... Olias, a most wondrous response, thank you... Mr Yeats...your poem is stunning...thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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