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Grief |
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azure Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 52 |
Wind slaps the night in my face -- blue northern lights shoot the sky, and I see you pale in the moonlight, wrestling with your misfortunes. The water sighs and I love you again; our distance is my grief. Azure "I put it down on paper and then the ghost does not ache so much" - Sandra Cisneros |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very good!! so vivid with so little words but you brought the point home with such yearning beauty. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Azure~ this made me touch a hand to my heart......and sigh.......beautifully done.  -SEA |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Azure, I hope that the distance closes in. Smile. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
{{{HugZ }}} to you my dear azure, for you have touched me once again with your writing... in such a similar time that is floating past me on the breaze of tonight. Much love to you. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Azure: I love these words - so vivid, so real, thank you for the read - I wish you sunshine and smiles for your day Roniece |
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