Open Poetry #10 |
A Love Like No Other |
Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
We have never met We have never kissed We have never looked into each other's eyes We have never strolled upon a beach and saw that sunset together We probably never will But I know, oh I know, that my love for you is real That each day spent with you would bring me happiness and laughter That each night in your arms would bring me unexpected joys Will it just be a forever dream? Will it just be a forever dream? [This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (edited 11-10-2000).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i hope not i hope all is gotten that is wanted yuh yuh nice! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Welcome back!! Such tender questions and thoughts you have woven...hold onto those dreams and may they all come true for you. Beautiful writing Roniece~ |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
WayOutWalt: thank you for your comments - if wishes can come true, then I'm putting up my hand now! Butterflies: Thank you for the welcome back, it's nice that you remembered me I've always been in awe of your exquisite writings - thanks for your support of mine Roniece |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Roniece! I am so happy to see you back, once again you are responsible for putting a simle on my face. You know that the words in this one reach out to me. Hang on to those dreams my friend. I wish you sunshine and smiles, take care! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Roniece, Is this a relationship with someone over the internet? It's nicely written. Hope you'll meet whomever it is and that he turns out your wishes. take care -Poeminister "...no single sound too rude Upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." --Ed |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
This has a lovely flow to it; but more than that; the feelings project so clearly. I enjoyed the read very much Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Eddie: Yes, I know you know these words well bello....but sometimes dreams do come true - this is my wish for you xx Roniece Poeminister: Thank you for your comments - and yes this is correct, it's funny how one meets someone on 'here' and suddenly one's whole life changes - or wants to change - but one feels like the change would be too great - thank you for reading Roniece |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Roniece, You are back! You were here before! How did I miss such a great poet first time around? love your work. Be well Kethry. Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Kethry: thank you so much for your kind words - I do enjoy your poetry too Roniece |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful tender dreams and emotions ...very nice indeed! |
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