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Just one Thought Of You
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Just one Thought Of You |
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SEA 
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since 2000-01-18
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.............That old familiar ache of wanting you...... I know it as I do my own skin that burn of desire so deep within Flowing through my veins with a life all it's own this ache for you........ like nothing I've ever known Just one thought of you brings this ache to sharp pain and I wait for you to touch me....... to love me......once again. -SEA- |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You think it's a virus? LOL...something must be going around...geez... Thanks SEA, not just for this lovely verse, but for all of your comforting words of late. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So, how far are you from Kentucky my sweet friend? I will be more than happy to let these lips touch you anytime. A poem to stir my thoughts tonight huh? You little wonderful rascal you. |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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Serenity~ It must be.....forget the flu shot we need one for this virus lol You are such a sweetheart, you don't have to thank me for caring about you *hugs* Mark~ baby, too far...much too far.......stir just your thoughts.....hhhmmmmmm.......I'll have to try harder  sighs and hugs  -SEA |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
you write with passion, SEA |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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MA~ thank you very much -SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Okay, so maybe more than just your thoughts my sweet friend.....but do I NEED to say that? I am sure by now that you already know don't you?LOL Yes, I am sure you do. |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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Mark~ you don't Really NEED to say...but UGH..I LOVE to hear your sweet whispers.......and yes, I know......as you know........  |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SEA, you have captured the yearning so passionately, and as always, the pleasure is mine to have read your rhyme Coco |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Ah, the words I could whisper in your ear. The love I'd share, the touch I'd give... Oops!! My wife says to take it back, but I won't, I just won't...ouch, OUCH I SAID. I still won't...now that she's walked out (hee, hee). Wonderful my friend...couldn't have done it better. jwesley |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i can feel the yearning Sea in your poem.. nicely penned.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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Coco~ thank you so much! JWesley~ that's ok babe......whisper...I'm listening....besides I'm very married so I'm safe to tease with touch....touch.....touch Victoria~ glad you liked  -SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
PSSSSST.....come here baby...lend me that sweet ear of yours...."whispering"--{!!@@!**@*!*@*&!&*&!!&&&*^%~~  *%^%&} Will that do my sweet friend? Think you can sleep comfortably in all of that.....after you catch your breath of course. |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hey, SEA, I've got about 3 achers down here in Florida I'll share with ya!! This is really,er, stimulating...MORE! |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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Mark~ my ear is on fire!! Love what you do with that talented tongue of yours....... Balladeer~ I lived in Florida for 3 months, I love it there....are you by Panama City? If so, I'm packing!! -SEA |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Sea, I loved every word of this, but I am laughing so hard at the replies I can t come up with anything more creative then that. Very beautiful read. Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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AWC~ thank you very much....lol you just jump in and tease......it's lots of fun..no one is left out......you just have fun! -SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
oh yeah baby...{*& %##~~**&#@@@+++p~~AND OF COURSE......*&&*^* %*^$$  } |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
SEA....gimmee a week! I'll move there!!!!! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That's desire gone wild in the Sea I can hear the waves of desire rolling in.....just one thought was a hot one whew!! |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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Mark~ Ohhhhhh baby I love what you're sayin' You are so much fun.....I sure missed you! Balladeer~ LOL love it......maybe I can just come play on the beaches there with you?! Ethome~ Deep within the SEA you will find desire a passion burning ~ endless and deep with a love so powerful it will make you weep -SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
SEA, wonderful love, this is a dream and you knew I'd love it, I know sooooooo predictable. (I'm not really I'm not, I can be very surprising) Watch out! OH the Porters after much discussion and loads of vetos from me. Some of their suggestions were very strange, even for porters. They Have decided on fan fare please OSCAR which stands for Our SEA Cares And Responds told you they were weird didn't I. So I'll get David to take this down to them tomorrow, may god have mercy on him. Take care Mushy and don't say I didn't warn you < !signature--> Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 11-07-2000).] |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
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Mushy~ OSCAR couldn't be cuter!!! Love it! and yes, my sweet mushy hearted friend, I knew as you know and I thank you kindly Tell the Porters that they ROCK!! -SEA |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
This poem is full of that longing desire, the want in capital letters...the desire screams out! great one...And I see mark is back to safeguard you. Good work Mark. Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
RonK~ that's ok......I still have kisses for you **SMOOCH** -SEA |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
SEA~ Oh what a beautiful want....this is so very sensual and just simply beautiful to read. Well penned my friend Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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azure Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 52 |
What strong emotion I get from this poem... I have felt this way many times before, and you put it into poetry SO eloquently! Azure "I put it down on paper and then the ghost does not ache so much" - Sandra Cisneros |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sea-babes you already know I relate to this one WAY TOO MUCH... me now infamous 3 am ache is well documented in the blue pages... and under my skin... sometimes me glows in the dark loved this one...dont ya know... yes you know later-you scratch my itch-Ill scratch yours gator hehehe jm |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Lovely! You do this so very well. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Whew, I know the exact thing you are talking about here. Such a hard thing to ignore, isn't it? This is a beauty of a poem. (So why don't all the men write those things to me, hm??) Sandra |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
A simple WOW is all I can formulate; I'm still blown away!!! Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
SEA, obviously I've been missing this side of you. and its a mighty fine exposed side. show me more.... Parker |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
all these fun responses - can't take away from the fact that this is a most beautiful most sensuous poem - and it goes in my box |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, finally OSCAR has finally given me their replies. (Now didn't I tell you they were slow )The trouble is I understand that they are so rarely all on together. So I've been down to their little lodge and grabbed what I can. Okay here we go. Wonderful, thanks SEA Dave P Love this Pete GREAT Si Love it Les Terrific Big Dave Good Poem Great work Martin Brilliant Barry Super Poem Brian Like this one Steve Good start to the day Steve B I like this one David S Cool like this one Jon Great Rick Terrific poem Rich Circe you must excuse their short replies, but I told them to keep it short and clean They send you a huge cheer, and they really mean it. Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Tracie~ thank you so much Azure~ that made me feel SO good, thank you Janet~ yes, I know you know dear heart......that ache is like no other......I hear ya... Eagle One~ thank you very much! Sandra~ I'm glad you liked this P35~ Thank you, always so nice to me Parker~ Hey handsome! Come here.......I'll show you more WY~ wow, what can I say? Thank you! Oscar~ DaveP,Pete,Si,Les,Big Dave,Martin,Barry,Brian,Steve, SteveB,David S, Jon,Rick, Rich.......boys, you've made my day! Thank you all so much Hugs for each of you! -SEA |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
pssst...hey SEA? Just me...I liked this...hope you can hear it over the clamoring of all the guys here...OK, I've got to leave now...shhh...bye... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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