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Penned Reality..........
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Penned Reality.......... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Penned Reality I took the pen, set it to page e'en though I was yet of age seeking wisdom, yet too young how that beginning was begun simple simple, keep it so how little then did I know simple it's not, see askew that is what simple words do lay the line, draw the fact then it becomes more than act dream the thought, reality is more becoming to you and me dreams and reality live in two worlds can't have one less the other unfurls reality bites, so young ones say old ones know, 'tis always been that way. Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Clever and wonderful write. *L* |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"dreams and reality live in two worlds can't have one less the other unfurls" Loved this Karilea! Now you know if you allow me to choose, I'll pick the dream every time. Loved your thoughts in this piece!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--Nice to weave a little of both into life...your poem is wisdom filled. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Ah yes... and before they know it - the young ones are saying "It's always been that way"...  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ What a jewel of thought - 'dreams and reality live in two worlds can't have one less the other unfurls' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy, comment taken to heart, thank you...{~,^} Kit, you and me both... and Martie, yes, we need both... Nan, ain't it the truth... Marge, so glad to see exactly what you like...thank you! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"It's always been that way. . . " I'm 33, does that mean I break the mold?? Smiles to you my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
great write Sunshine and I know what you're talking about....the connection between reality and dreams is consciousness at its best...my fav. saying is .."reality seldom bears the possibilities of imagination." |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sven, what mold? ethome, I like your quote...I may adopt it... thank you both... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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